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Penname: atymer [Contact]
Real name: Patriica Member Since: 04 May 2010
Membership status: Member
Waiting for more Atlantis
Reviews by atymer

Summary: They should be getting used to torture. They're not.

Updated: 03 Feb 2011; Published: 09 Jan 2011
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
11 Dec 2012
Well done. It left a warm sensation over my heart.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Have you ever wondered what our Lantean heroes do today? This is the answer for fifteen of them, including the team (of course). Oh, btw, it's a crackfic.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Jennifer Keller, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Radek Zelenka, Richard Woolsey, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 852; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Jun 2011; Published: 16 Jun 2011
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
LOL very funny. At least Ronan get to use his knives! lol Poor Carson! I am sure Kanaan would have been fed up to his neck with adventure of any kind.
John,John John...only you. The world would have been safer if Kavanagh was still far far away. lol life long dream indeed, lol lol

Author's Response: I\'m glad I was able to entertain you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Sheppard arrived after a long ride in a small mining town and he didn't want to stay there. Western-AU. R-Rating for one pretty violent scene.

Updated: 20 Jun 2011; Published: 18 Jun 2011
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
Ah, everyone is dark grey in this fic. I enjoyed the back stories of the characters. They all have scars and secrets. I hope the new sheriff isn't buried in a coal mine before it's over. Hopefully, the others can profit and move on unscathed any further. The author created a sense of time and place. I could almost feel the damp air and enclosed environs of the saloon.

Author's Response: Thanks again for this review! I wasn\'t here on this site for some time, so I really enjoy reading your comments now.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "The Return" AU. When Ronon said he couldn't leave the galaxy until every last Wraith was dead, he never guessed it would happen so quickly. Finding himself at loose ends, he goes to Earth to join Sheppard in the war against the Ori.

Categories: Crossovers > General, Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Other, Richard Woolsey, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Friendship, Pre-slash, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6484; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Aug 2011; Published: 18 Aug 2011
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
11 Dec 2012
This is a heartache. I am glad they have each other. I think Teyla will be an ache that won't fade. At least they can communicate more often with the others, but it won't be quite the same. It reminds that when the series was on, I really worried about the team members getting killed off. With the deaths that happened you couldn't really feel any of the core was safe. This story made me miss the show all over again.
Chapter 1: Leave No Man Behind

Summary: John can't let himself have what he wants.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > All Varieties
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2966; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Oct 2011; Published: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
11 Dec 2012
If Teyla had been such a free spirit and John had let go, I imagine Lorne would have fit perfectly is such a scene. After all, its always the quiet ones. ;)

Author's Response: Indeed. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1
Hunted by Leah [R]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: Crossover with Hawaii 5-0

"You know what? Yesterday--if it was just yesterday, and not, say, six months ago--I was watching my partner kick yet another door in and I was thinking that the only things I had to worry about were Steve getting us killed, Grace's eventual dating, and if I was ever going to find an apartment that wasn't infested with cockroaches, black mold or ghosts of old ladies in funny hats. And now, suddenly, I find out that the entire fucking universe is a giant terrarium project populated with aliens that want to kill us. And you two, apparently, live in another galaxy and don't seem to think there's anything weird about that. Does that sum up the situation here? Or did I miss something?"



Updated: 19 Jan 2012; Published: 19 Jan 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
03 Oct 2013
This is awesome. I had so much fun reading. It was fantastic how well the author tapped into everyone's personalities. Nothing of them was lost in the AU. Especially Danny (lol). So Kudos to the author and everyone who participated in getting this story posted. I had such a wonderful time. I had been curious if a cross over with 5-0 would work and it was more than a pleasant surprise. This is definitely a keeper. Thanks so much for effort you put into this story. Kudos Kudos.
Chapter 1: One of One
Eggs by MASH4077 [G]
[Reviews - 1]

Summary: Tag to my own story "The gallows await" with a lighter approach than the original story, explaining how McKay got hold of Kavanaghs eggs.

Categories: General
Characters: Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 546; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 May 2012; Published: 11 Apr 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
lol What I want to know is why Rodney didn't steal a few chickens instead. lol Kavanagh wouldn't have to find out about it and they would have at least two eggs everyday instead of a lot of eggs one day. I think he just wanted to aggravate Kavanagh. lol

Author's Response: Maybe Rodney is afraid of chicken... No, actually you\'re pretty right. Thanks for reviewing!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A story about Ronon and McKay in a trash dumpster

Categories: General
Characters: Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Action/Adventure, Character Study, Drama, Humour, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1370; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 May 2012; Published: 11 Apr 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
I wonder if Rodney's laughter wasn't a bit hysterical by then. I can relate to being afraid (no no Ronan I didn't say afraid!)of chemicals. Smelly or not, they can kill and you can't fight back. I thought the story had a grim undertone which added atmosphere.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot for this review! What you said was exactly what I had in mind when I wrote this story.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: McKay was drawn into another dimension, crueler than his own. He has to find a way back home. Please read the A/N!!!

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe, Character Study, Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 14567; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Jul 2012; Published: 05 Jun 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
The different lives will certainly give Rodney nights of contemplation. I felt really bad for Carson too.
The atmosphere was very on edge. I think a lot of people of this universe would be ready to explode into violence at any moment. There don't appear to be a lot of rules governing punishment, accept don't cripple or kill them. The author painted a scary place where everyone above you would do eventual harm.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And yes, I wanted to paint a scary place.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Omphalos by Temaris [G]
[Reviews - 1]

Summary: McKay heads for the hills, while Teyla, John and Ronon negotiate the delicate art of hostage taking.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8875; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Jul 2012; Published: 29 Jul 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
Oh mini Johns, cute and mischievous. I want ten of those and a few Ronans. So cute. lol
Of course I would need a lot of accident insurance and live far away from people who might take exception to broken windows, frightened pets and household appliances acting strange.
I enjoyed this heaps. It would be nice to raise a few prodigy Rodney babies that would be spared the things that made him so insecure.

Author's Response: The possibilities are just delightful, right? Or horrifying. I can\'t quite decide which ;) Thank you, I\'m glad you enjoyed (and thank you for the positive storm of reviewing, it\'s been a real joy to have these pop up.)
Chapter 1: Omphalos

Summary: Having the Ancient gene has one or two other minor side-effects beyond lighting up Ancient tech...

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5080; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Jul 2012; Published: 29 Jul 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
I enjoyed the combination of universe.
It would work as a series if the author is so inclined. I would love exploring this aspect of the gene, watching relationships develop, or not, and cheering close quarter combat confrontations with the Wraith!
See, you couldn't get a more obvious HINT for more of this crossover. ;)

Author's Response: Heh. Well, maybe it could be, I admit in my head there should be a lot more Ronon sword fighting and close quarter sword fighting generally, and I do have a reason for WHY immortals and the Ancient gene go together :). Which isn\'t a promise by any means :) Thank you for commenting :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Triage by MASH4077 [PG]
[Reviews - 2]

Summary: Beckett had made a difficult decision.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 517; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Aug 2012; Published: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
The support staff is the rock upon which the doctor stands. I liked that most about this story.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A silly little piece with McKay I just had to write.

Categories: General
Characters: Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 450; Completed: Yes
Updated: 15 Aug 2012; Published: 13 Aug 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
lol, I would love to know where they got the spuds and if the fish was really fish! lol and if it is fish why it would be forbidden, unless like shrimp the cholesterol levels are off the charts! lol

Author's Response: Yes, it\'s all about cholesterol. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Enough by malchance [NC-17]
[Reviews - 1]

Summary: The tangled limbs and heavy breathing made Rodney certain John was cheating on him with someone. When John left the ring to watch on the sidelines with Ronon, Rodney began to feel sick.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard
Characters: Jennifer Keller, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3787; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Oct 2012; Published: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
The boys got very very luck. Lack of communication could have destructed their good thing. What a relief.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Specialist by Wings128 [NC-17]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: Three years in the making...John finally gets the help he needs from his favourite specialist.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard, Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: First Time
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3765; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Oct 2012; Published: 21 Oct 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
Very hot. I really like this pairing. When I saw Ronan's first appearance and they sized each other up I could see it happening. Especially the frustration because they would have waited years before taking the plunge.

Author's Response: *grins* Thanks, I\'m thrilled you liked it. Watching John and Ronon sizing each other up is sooooo HOT. Check out the sequel \"2300\" to see what else they get up to :-) Obviously I love this pairing too, it\'s just the thought that John finally has someone strong enough to protect him and allow him to let his guard down, relax and have some really really f\'ing great sex! Plus two gorgeous guys lost in the throes of abandoned pleasure.....bee-uuu-ti-fullllll. Thanks for reading and reviewing:-)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: The gate's translation protocol breaks down the moment they step through the gate. John and Ronon, fortunately, aren't big talkers.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Ronon Dex
Genres: Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4630; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Dec 2012; Published: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
10 Dec 2012
This is the way 'courtship' would go with these two. I get Ronan, man of action and lots of frustration. ;)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Some four years after Rodney McKay and John Sheppard were kicked out of Atlantis, things are not going so well for the ancient city and the new expedition team. The IOA and SGC want Rodney and John back at any price, and dispatch O'Neill with orders to get them back. But after the way they were treated, will he succeed?

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1282; Completed: No
Updated: 23 Feb 2013; Published: 19 Jan 2013
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
04 Oct 2013
I hope this wasn't just a shot and as been let go of. This is a very intriguing beginning. I know it had to be betrayal more than anything else for Rodney to remake himself to protect John to this extreme. I want to read more.
Chapter 1: The Long and Winding Road

Summary: Gifts Team Sheppard Received That They Didn't Even Know they Wanted

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Drama, Friendship, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8883; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Mar 2013; Published: 10 Mar 2013
Reviewer: atymer (Signed)
04 Oct 2013
This was really lovely. John did come into his own once he arrived at Atlantis. No doubt it was home. Ronon certainly needed a break from war. Rodney needed to Connect with people instead of turning them away, fending them off, protecting himself at all costs. And Teyla, certainly there was nothing in the galaxy that would make her think she would ever live to age.
In all the universe, it is sometimes the little things that may keep us going, when all else fails.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1