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Penname: Lay Riley [Contact]
Real name: Alena Riley Member Since: 22 May 2010
Membership status: Member
Obsessed with everything and anything Stargate. Horseback rider and writer.



I hope you enjoy my stories!
Reviews by Lay Riley

Summary: Every man has a dream Author's notes: Don't ask me what I was thinking. Had a little spare time and an old drabble that was squealing for a new lease on life.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1106; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Sep 2005; Published: 02 Sep 2005
Reviewer: Lay Riley (Signed)
25 May 2010
Awww he hates sheppard??? And attt? That was funny. I liked the first part , but the part where everybody laughed seemed a little NOT like Atlantis personel. The rest was great.
Chapter 1: Daydream

Summary: There are all kinds of ways Doppelganger could have gone. Season four spoilers. (Pairings: Elizabeth/Kate; Kate/Teyla, Rodney/Katie Brown; John/Kate)

Categories: Bitextual, Crossovers > Ship Pairings
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3001; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Mar 2008; Published: 20 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Lay Riley (Signed)
23 May 2010
I liked the immortality excuse. " I can't die." lol
that would be nice if they wrote it into the show, it would give the team an advantage
Chapter 1: Five Ways Kate Heightmeyer Didn't Die

Summary: Ever since John Sheppard stepped onto Atlantis, the city's been waking. Now he's woken something he can't shut off...

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 43307; Completed: No
Updated: 06 Feb 2010; Published: 10 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Lay Riley (Signed)
24 May 2010
Wow, that was really good. The way you right is really profesional... Although you are just coping the episodes. It was really great.
Chapter 2: The Storm

Summary: While Sora tries to integrate into the Atlantis community problems arise between her and her new team leader, and she has to survive the oncoming Wraith onslaught.

Categories: General, Ship Pairings > Other Pairings
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Original Character, Other, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Series: What happened to Sora

Word count: 9933; Completed: No
Updated: 06 Jun 2010; Published: 11 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Lay Riley (Signed)
25 May 2010
Great writing. I always wondered what happened to Sora after The Eye. This shows a different side of the Genii that sounds true. You didn't make up a silly excuse for her to stay like, jhon is hott so I want to stay with him. The whole Genii don't have friends is great.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
[Reviews - 2]

Summary: Ronon has been on Earth before, but it was never his home.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1766; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Mar 2010; Published: 25 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Lay Riley (Signed)
22 May 2010
I liked it a lot. It souned a lot like the real ronon's reactions.

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m sorry my response is so late. RL is frantic!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: When Atlantis decide that she does not like, she can be really evil in getting rid of you.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2662; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Aug 2011; Published: 05 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Lay Riley (Signed)
23 May 2010
Funny :)
I love how the story is writen like Atlatis has it's own thoughts and decides to get rid of Sam
Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Summary: McKay catches Sheppard doing something he never thought he'd see.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drabble, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 662; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Apr 2010; Published: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Lay Riley (Signed)
23 May 2010
I liked it.... Doesn't sound like jhon, but it was original. I'm sick of the hundreds of stories that say the same thing in differnt words.
So this is good. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A drabble with exactly 100 words and with Colonel Sheppard.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Drabble, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 101; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 May 2010; Published: 08 May 2010
Reviewer: Lay Riley (Signed)
22 May 2010
Do wrath even go to the bathroom? Lol.
Really funny and creative

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And yes, I was brooding over that question too.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1