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Penname: lizlou [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 26 May 2010
Membership status: Member

Reviews by lizlou

Summary: Rodney McKay meets international playboy Johnnie Sheppard on a cruise to the French Riviera. Written for Reel_SGA challenge.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 94139; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Jun 2006; Published: 25 Jun 2006
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
26 Jul 2010
Wonderful story. Had me totally captivated throughout and in need of a box of tissues after Rodney's accident! Think you captured their doubts and insecurities perfectly.
Chapter 1: Chapter One
Mexico City by seperis [NC-17]
[Reviews - 13]

Summary: This is why John should be supervised when playing with other former military boys. Next thing Rodney knows, he'll wake up and John will have bazookas and crates of grenades and God help them all, nuclear weaponry stacked around him, and then Rodney will have to exile him to the floor, which will suck for their sex life so much.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, AU - Alternate Universe, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: The Arizona Project

Word count: 10419; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Sep 2008; Published: 19 Sep 2008
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
06 Aug 2010
Nooooooo!! You can't end it like this!!! Great series -really enjoyed it but devastated by the way it ended -just like rodney!
Chapter 1: Mexico City

Summary: Vala Mal Doran and her partners, renegades Jehan abd-Ba'al and Meredith McKay, hijack the Tau'ri ship Prometheus and leave the Milky Way behind in search of the Lost City of the Ancients, Atlantis.

Updated: 22 Mar 2010; Published: 22 Mar 2010
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
26 Jan 2011
Brilliant story! Kept me on the edge of my seat thoughout. Love the way you tweaked the episodes to fit your AU. Think Vala Jehan and Meredith work brilliantly together and am now off to read the sequel!
Chapter 1: Destination: Atlantis
Forging Bonds by Belvella [NC-17]
[Reviews - 76]

Summary: In a universe where shape shifters and rangers with super senses are a common occurrence. John finds out that there is someone that he truly wants and realise that he will do what ever it takes to get that one and keep him safe.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 19 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 56076; Completed: No
Updated: 15 Apr 2013; Published: 01 May 2010
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
16 Jul 2011
Interesting chapter! So Jennifer is a legendary - that will spice things up! And what exactly did Caldwell mean?
Hope you update soon..
Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
13 Dec 2011
I absolutely love this story! Wonder why Rodney thinks it wouldn't work with him and John? Wonder what he'll do if Kane finds his way to Atlantis. Think John maybe shouldn't hold himself to waiting that week! Hope you update soon.
Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Summary: What drives that strength of character? McKay didn't know either John Sheppard well enough to fully understand. Add in a reporter, a desire for truth and a taste of what "could be" & that unsigned non-disclosure agreement could be a problem. Vegas-fic.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, AU - Alternate Universe, Drama
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 19035; Completed: No
Updated: 29 Aug 2010; Published: 03 Aug 2010
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
14 Aug 2010
Loved Vegas -so much to explore so I'm really interested to see where you are going to take this. Great start -hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words and for taking the time to read and review! I truly appreciate it. I agree, Vegas was amazing. It opened up so many opportunities and so many different sides to characters we already felt like we knew fairly well. Vegas-Sheppard especially intrigued me because it was very much a glimpse of how OUR Sheppard could have gone. We know that OUR Sheppard is capable of that kind of implied \"dark\" but he\'s got a much better control over that aspect of his personality. Again, thanks so much for reading. Hopefully you\'ll enjoy what else I have in store.
Chapter 4: Chapter Three

Summary: Post-Common Ground fic. In the aftermath of negotiating and nearly losing John's life, Elizabeth finds herself taking action that have long-standing repercussions to their relationship and the entire structure of Atlantis command.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Weir
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 35067; Completed: No
Updated: 28 Dec 2010; Published: 13 Nov 2010
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
06 Dec 2010
Awesome! Love the emotional angst between John and Elizabeth so painful!So... John has laid his cards on the table and now everything has gone to pot! Surely you haven't killed off Rodney???? Pleeeeez update soon1
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Sheppard learns first-hand that while two things may look identical, on closer examination those things are sometimes as opposite as two things can possibly be.

Updated: 19 Feb 2011; Published: 10 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
06 May 2011
must admit i had some problems with this story. I could accept what happened in the AU but found things became a little unbelievable when he returned. No team? And Carson would never have had Lorne there while he examined him. Also the idea of sending a bomb through to wipe out the entire AU seems a little off. One bad abusive 'relationship' doesn't mean the rest are the same. Characters seemed a little off to me.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story. I appreciate the feedback. You are correct that with this one I took a few liberties, such as the team, to make the story work the way I wanted. Destroying the AU troubled me from the beginning but I wasn\'t sure what to do to resolve the conflict and bring some closure for John. If you have any suggestions for alternatives I would welcome your thoughts and ideas. Thanks again for reading my story and for taking the time to give me your thoughts.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Only John Sheppard could stumble into trouble in the most simple of circumstances.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Original Character, Richard Woolsey, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Study, Drama
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 12 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 22539; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Mar 2011; Published: 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
08 Mar 2011
So John was going surfing but didn't bring swim trunks with him? Now he is still wearing the personal shield? When he's out surfing? Has he had it on the whole time? In which case I think he and Kao might have had some problems during sex!!! If he hasn't had it on the whole time why is he wearing it now?

Author's Response: Ooooh! Good points. I hadn\'t thought about the personal shield potentially interfering with sex. And yes, I had envisioned him wearing it the whole time, including when he was out surfing. I completely missed the swim trunks idea - wow! I need to read my own writing a bit better. Thanks for reading and for sending me your review. Most appreciated.
Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Random Acts by Madison [NC-17]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: "It's called a random act of kindness," she said. "You should try it out sometime.

Takes place sometime in Season 5. Warning for fluffy holiday coziness.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Jennifer Keller, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Richard Woolsey, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 25984; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Jan 2012; Published: 14 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
15 Jan 2012
Wonderful! Love that Teyla has been having bets with Ronon - and winning! And that Rodney FINALLY realised who he wanted!

Author's Response: I like to think that Ronon\'s knife collection is slowly being depleted. :-) I\'m so pleased you liked this--thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hunted by Leah [R]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: Crossover with Hawaii 5-0

"You know what? Yesterday--if it was just yesterday, and not, say, six months ago--I was watching my partner kick yet another door in and I was thinking that the only things I had to worry about were Steve getting us killed, Grace's eventual dating, and if I was ever going to find an apartment that wasn't infested with cockroaches, black mold or ghosts of old ladies in funny hats. And now, suddenly, I find out that the entire fucking universe is a giant terrarium project populated with aliens that want to kill us. And you two, apparently, live in another galaxy and don't seem to think there's anything weird about that. Does that sum up the situation here? Or did I miss something?"



Updated: 19 Jan 2012; Published: 19 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
22 Jan 2012
This was great! Loved the whump, and the way John stoically carried on. Thought you got all four characters spot on , but i especially liked Danny and the way he goes on even more than Rodney! Loved the uniqueness of each persons gift and how well it suited each person. Would have quite liked to see them all in Atantis together - but two like Sheppard and McGarrett? Just a bit toooo much I think!
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Chapter 1: One of One