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Penname: fangirl29 [Contact]
Real name: Jess Member Since: 01 Aug 2010
Membership status: Member
avid reader, lurker, reviewer...devoted sg1 fan and fic reader of all things Jack/Daniel...madly in love with the very fine and dreamy Major Evan Lorne...if only some fantasies were my reality ;)
Reviews by fangirl29

Summary: The Gate shuts down and he's left sitting there, dizzy with relief and with heat. He licks his lips, feels the sting and tastes blood. Twenty minutes until they're safe again. [Lorne & team]

Categories: General
Characters: Major Lorne
Genres: Action/Adventure, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2435; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Aug 2006; Published: 20 Aug 2006
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
02 Aug 2010
What a wonderfully descriptive story. I love Lorne angst! You're a very talented writer so I'm surprised that you only have 1 story here :( Thank you for sharing. Please feel free to write many more Lorne-centric stories soon :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: He'd seen this much blood before.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Challenge, Character Study
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4474; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Aug 2007; Published: 24 Aug 2007
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
02 Aug 2010
Ugh! So poignant and lovely and beautifully written. A troubled, angst-filled Major Lorne is always a good read. Thank you!
Chapter 1: Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man

Summary: They're lost and the rules are slipping away.

Categories: Bitextual, Threesomes and Moresomes > All Varieties, Ship Pairings > Lorne/Other, Ship Pairings > Zelenka/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe, First Time
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1938; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Feb 2009; Published: 04 Feb 2009
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
14 Aug 2010
Oh. My. Goodness.
Chapter 1: Piracy Is The Only Option

Summary: With the team still trapped in what remains of Michael's compound, and Teyla still in Michael's hands, Colonel Carter must hurry to rescue them before the game of 'Lantean in the middle' takes an even more deadly turn. So when someone asks, "How much worse can it get?" you just know that things are not going to go according to plan.

Updated: 08 Feb 2009; Published: 06 Feb 2009
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
07 Aug 2010
Nooooooooooooo! There's a reason I try to avoid wips, but you had me at Major Lorne...I need to know what happens to him!!! I hope you find your muse soon so that you can continue such a well written story. The details, dialogue, and story line are wonderful. Please keep writing. I hope to read an update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review. The series is a lot further along on my personal website, because it is so difficult to post stories here. If you look for \'cedarfiction dot net\' you can find the website. There are 10 completed stories, some of which continue the arc begun in Harm\'s Way, and reveal more of Lorne\'s fate. Many thanks for your kind words. Eirian
Chapter 4: Act 4 & 5
Just As Good by Ayama_chi [PG-13]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: After being banished from Atlanis, a very frusterated John is about to lose his mind working for the SGC. That is, until he discovers that he doesn't know his ex-XO nearly as well as he thought.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama, Episode Related, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 18111; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Nov 2009; Published: 06 Nov 2009
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
07 Aug 2010
Oh my gosh! I've only recently started reading SGA and had no idea that Lorne/Sheppard could be so great! The best Lorne/Sheppard story by far is Mutual Misunderstandings. Reading that one story ruined everything for me! Nothing I come across is as good as that ONE story. It's driving me crazy! I decide to check out another one of your posted works and read this one. It's warm and wonderful and makes me feel like I do when I wear my worn, fuzzy sweater on a pleasant winder's day :) I have "real life" things to do but first chance I get I'm reading another one of your stories. You are so talented! Thank you for sharing your work with us mere mortals :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I\'m glad I managed to warm you up, be sure to remember my fics come January... :))
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: The aftermath of a routine mission that went wrong.

Categories: General
Characters: Major Lorne
Genres: Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2304; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Dec 2009; Published: 12 Nov 2009
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
02 Aug 2010
I'm new to this site, having scoured the universe and the Pegasus galaxy for Lorne-centric fic. Guess what?! I found it in your story! This is beautifully written and you paint such a graphic picture of his injuries and emotions with so few words. Thank you for focusing on my favorite Major. I think his character and contributions to Atlantis are severely overlooked. Thanks again for sharing!

Author's Response: Thankyou. He\'s one of my faves and I struggled just the same to find any.Its why I chose to share some of mine. I\'m working on another which focuses on him.\r\n
Chapter 1: Sleepless Companions
Let go by gemini [NC-17]
[Reviews - 1]

Summary: Sometimes you have to just do what you need to, what you want to, to get through the moment.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Original Character
Genres: Angst, Hurt Comfort, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3359; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Feb 2010; Published: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
14 Aug 2010
I cannot understand how such a beautiful, sexy, hot, passionate story doesn't have any reviews on this site :) Well done, well written. I love Major Lorne-especially all angsty - and naked!!!

Author's Response: Thankyou! The nakedness really does highlight the day.Im thinking I should write more spontaneously from now on
Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Summary: How high a price are you willing to pay to get your hands on everything Atlantis could have ever hoped for? A slip of a tongue during an off world visit and some help from Rodney and John and his second in command are about to find out.

Updated: 24 Jul 2010; Published: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
01 Aug 2010
Ugh! Couldn't put off reading the epilogue until tomorrow! This was the icing on the cake and a beautiful ending to your story. I don't "need" a sequel, per say, but how about another Lorne story?! Yours is the first story I have read on this site so let me see what other Lorne-goodies I might find :) Thank you again for sharing such beautiful work :)

Author's Response: Once more, thank you. If you\'re interested in other stories I\'ve wrote three more, but there are good authors here on the website, as well as in \"crossroads\" for rare pairings in SGA. I envy you for having the pleasure of first read. Good luck! :)
Chapter 13: Epilogue
Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
01 Aug 2010
I consumed your story in one sitting (my ass is numb). I wish I smoked so I could light up after reading John and Evan in bed. So H-O-T!!! But really, your story is wonderful for so many more reasons. You obviously put a lot of time and effort into so much detail, descriptions, dialogue, characterizations, and love. The part where John approaches Lorne in the empty mess hall and Lorne admits to knowing how much John "disliked" him made me cry :( Rodney's snarkiness was right on, even Ronon's badassness was awesome (he's so hot even when he doesn't mean to be). I felt Evan's anger at the injustice of society at being gay, I felt it when John realized how much he loved Evan. Utterly beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing. I have been on a man hunt for all things Major Lorne and there is so much trash out there. Your work left me speechless. You're amazing!!! I don't know if you're still writing, but I'd love to read more Lorne angst and whump :)

Author's Response: Wow, if you think you\'re speechless imagine how I feel after such aheartwarming review! Thank you very muhc, and I\'m glad I managed to convey all that to you and make you enjoy the story. You have my deepest admiration for managing to \"swallow\" everything on one go. Thank you very much!
Chapter 12: Chapter 12