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Penname: Lorneslady [Contact]
Real name: niki Member Since: 03 Sep 2010
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Reviews by Lorneslady
Second Fiddle by Azrael [NC-17]

Summary: In the aftermath of Arcturus, Rodney deals with John's loss of trust. Then John has to deal with the loss of Rodney. *not a deathfic!!!*

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Episode Related, First Time, Friendship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 88349; Completed: No
Updated: 21 Jun 2006; Published: 15 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
13 Nov 2010
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE

finish this fic :-)
Chapter 1: breakdown

Summary: Written for the LJ Atlantis kink challenge details are as follows: I'd like to see something involving bondage (collars/leashes in particular) with some light d/s, possessiveness, and some biting is a definite plus. If Sheppard is in it, dog tags are a welcome addition. With a happy ending, & no non-con. Pretty much would like McKay with Beckett and/or Sheppard and/or Zelenka.


Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge, Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 25676; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Apr 2008; Published: 17 Apr 2006
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
12 Sep 2010
Sublime story, loved it. So glad I found it.

Can't wait to read more of your stories.

~X~
Chapter 3: Chapter 2b

Summary: God, I miss you. (Spoilers for Sunday. Beckett/Sheppard with hints of McKay/Sheppard.)

Updated: 19 Feb 2007; Published: 19 Feb 2007
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
27 Sep 2010
Amazing piece of work. Broke my heart and drew me to tears, it was poetry.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read. I tried to do the same as much as I could with Cold. LOL not sure Dylan Thomas would approve :)
Chapter 1: One of One

Summary: Coming to terms with your own sexuality should be a piece of cake. Pairings: McKay/Sheppard, McKay/Other.

Categories: Bitextual
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama, First Time, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes, Non-consensual
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 11773; Completed: Yes
Updated: 27 Apr 2007; Published: 23 Apr 2007
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
27 Sep 2010
Such a good story of how things can go wrong so quickly.
Loved your Ronon, he was just the right blend of quiet wisdom, strength and compassion.
Also loved seeing the caring, patient, nurturing side of John.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 2: Part Two

Summary: Sheppard and Lorne are serious. In fact, they've been serious for a while now. But, if they never leave Atlantis they'll have to hide forever. Maybe it's time to leave?

Updated: 26 Sep 2007; Published: 23 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
26 Sep 2010
Loved this story. Evan and John are very realistic with each other.

Author's Response: Wow...thank you very much. I hadn\'t looked at this story in some time. I appreciate your reading it.
Chapter 1: Moving on or not?

Summary: Sheppard/OMC Connor Davids is a shy, quiet scientist who keeps to himself but over time finds he's lonely. John Sheppard is the man everyone wants and everyone wants to be except all he wants is quiet understanding. Can he get that from the new Dr. Davids? Can they both overcome gender to be with each other?

This story is now complete.

Updated: 29 Oct 2010; Published: 04 Mar 2009
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
07 Feb 2011
OK, I was up until 5am finishing off BCD so I'm not sure how coherent or articulate this review will be but here we go.
BCD was rec'ed to me by a good friend. I don't usually read OMC fic's and was reluctant on the uptake but boy am I glad I did.
I looked forward with barely suppressed delight to reading BCD every night for while, and in my minds eye, walking round Atlantis with my favourite characters and sharing in their joys, sadness and struggles. Thank you for making me laugh, cry, and love along with them.
Connor was an amazing character, so rich and multi dimensional and the way he blossomed into the beautiful man he became but still had a lot of those insecurities that made him essentially Connor was masterful. Just in case you were interested as an author as to what goes on in your reader's heads, in my head Connor looked like Jared Leto.
Thank you for making John so beautiful, he's my favourite character so maybe I'm bias. I loved the dichotomy of him being a hardened Military man who's seen the worst side of life and the man still willing to open his heart and risk everything for Connor. I'm also thankful that you didn't make John as emotionally inarticulate as most authors tend to make him. It was refreshing to see John, in private with Connor at least, taking the bull by the horns and trying to talk through problems, fears and anxieties.
Rodney and Eric, what can I say. Another beautiful OMC and it was interesting to see how Rodney's character developed via his relationship with Eric instead of some of the key moments in SGA, but I still think he had a long way to go and would love to see more of them.
Teyla and Evan, what a stroke of genius pairing these two up. I'd never even thought of these two together but they're perfect and would love to see more of them as well.
Like many, I've never been a big Keller fan but I appreciate her character, her relationship with Ronon and how she helped him develop.
I cannot thank you enough for writing such a long adult story. It was an absolute delight (as a reader), to be able to immerse myself in this world you created and to have room for character development, slowly unfolding plot lines, tension and release, relationship developments, intrigue and suspense and so much more. In the majority of adult SGA fictions you just start getting into the story and they end. I like something that's adult and has a wonderful story to it too, something I can get my teeth into.
I don't usually read fic's until they're completed and I'm so so very grateful you completed this beautiful story it's a wonderful achievement and I look forward to reading many more of your SGA fic's.
Chapter 1: Arrival
Genesis by the_cephalopod [NC-17]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: In the aftermath of the Dorandan mission, Rodney thinks things can't get any worse. Not only has he lost his faith in his abilities and his science, but he has also alienated the people who mean the most to him. With his confidence and his relationships lying in tatters, the news that the SGC is sending an independent reviewer to assess his performance comes as a final blow - surely it is only a matter of time before he will be forced to return to Earth. But things in Pegasus are not always what they seem and soon it becomes clear that Rodney must learn to trust himself again and work with John and the rest of the team before it's too late - not just for Atlantis, but quite possibly for the entire universe.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Study, Episode Related, First Time, Romance, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 62542; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Jan 2010; Published: 13 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
21 Sep 2010
Just discovered your writings and I love your writing.
I was so absorbed in this story I could stop reading.
The characters were perfect, the tension palpable and the emotions spot on.
Thank you for a great story, I'm off to read some more.
~X~
Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Consequences by Kimber [NC-17]
[Reviews - 15]

Summary: AU version of post Trinity. Rodney gets sent back to Earth, and can no longer working for SGC and can't work in the Science field per contract constraints. Someone close to Rodney will pay the price when he refuses to work under the radar. John is giving Elizabeth and Jack only a few months to get Rodney back.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 16 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 52499; Completed: No
Updated: 01 May 2012; Published: 25 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
28 Oct 2010
Great to see this update, I'm still going to wait until it's finished before reading it and I'm really looking forward to it :-)

Author's Response: You have more willpower then I do when it comes to WIP, I bow to you.....
Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
04 Dec 2010
Just stopped by to cheer you on. Keep up the writing.
I do have a lot of will power when it comes to WIP lol If it's a really good story ( and this looks like it's brilliant) and it's not finished a WIP, for me, is like watching a really good film but walking out before seeing the ending.
*gets out pompoms and starts cheering you on*

Author's Response: I\'m almost done with 13 and off to the beta it will go....have 14 outlined as well. I thank you so much of the support....Everyone rocks, be it the reviewers or the quiet readers.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
All I Want by Madison [NC-17]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: He wanted to make the day memorable...

Updated: 12 Nov 2010; Published: 12 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
13 Nov 2010
Yeay! new stories. I miss your writing so I feel like Christmas has come early.

My only criticism is (and this no reflection on you it's because I'm greedy) they're not long enough. I miss your epic, angsty, sexy tales of McKay and Sheppard.

This was a lovely dip back into the Cabin World series. I love all the little details you put into to your stories they really do absorb the reader into to story.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! You\'re right, these *are* short for me--this current run being a series of b-day gifts for friends on LJ. I am working on longer stuff, but RL keeps getting in the way. Thank you for your encouraging words though!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Maybe I think it's rude to come in someone's mouth"

Spoilers thru Season 5

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4069; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Feb 2011; Published: 12 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Lorneslady (Signed)
13 Feb 2011
I adore the way you write John and Rodney. Even with a short fic there are layers to their characters which make you want to find out more about their motivations and past. What drives them to be the people they are, why they have the hang-ups they do, why they are better together than apart.
Plus it was incredibly HOT too which is always appreciated.

Author's Response: I like the idea that they are better together than they are apart--thank you! I also appreciate knowing you found it hot--heh-heh, I\'ve been working on that a bit. *beams*
Chapter 1: Chapter 1