10 May 2011
Looking to be able to give feedback to authors.
Light and sunset and a smidgeon of romance
Updated: 21 Aug 2011; Published: 20 Aug 2011
Wow. What an incredible gift you have with words. I was right there in that sunset.
Gorgeous - thanks you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you, Erica. I appreciate the fb
After everything, Ronon takes John back to Sateda.
Updated: 22 Oct 2011; Published: 30 Aug 2011
:::sigh::: Lovely - I have a magnificent picture in my head of Sateda's Grand(est) Canyon. A sweet connection between them, thank you for sharing this.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I\'m glad you liked it, and thank you also for taking the time to comment!
AU: Ronon's immune to the wraith. Detective John Sheppard doesn't die in the Las Vegas desert. It would probably be easier if the opposites of both were true.
Updated: 17 Mar 2012; Published: 30 Aug 2011
I can't believe it - this series has completely sucked me in, and I don't even LIKE the John/Ronon pairing. :-)
Nice job on the plotting and slow build-up - it feels very "true". I look forward to future chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'ve got a bit more written and will be updating with more frequency now that RL has settled down to a dull roar. Thanks for reading! :)
Routine exploration of Atlantis goes FUBAR, John disappears, two years later Rodney takes a vacation to Disneyland, and who should be working at Soaring Over California.
Updated: 24 Sep 2011; Published: 24 Sep 2011
Oh, man - that was fabulous. What a *satisfying* read, which I would never in a million years have thought could have been done set in Disneyland! lol
Your Rodney was spot on - I was gleeful at his handling of the Californian - and so very supportive without ever once being OOC. What an achievement!
And John - :::woobles:::. So believable, so easy to see him reacting like that. I especially loved the way you portrayed how he cut off his past - not just over this disaster, but before coming to Atlantis. It perfectly told the story of the "why" of the character's lack of backstory on the show.
I want an epilogue, tho - Ronon and Teyla giving him what-for. Especially Teyla and her awesome new leg, I'm thinking bantos training will rise to new painful heights the first few times back... :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ve been having this plot bunny running around in my brain for months now. Glad I finally put it on paper. In every piece you\'re really happy with there is a personal ephiphany about a character. And that bit you culled out about John was my personal epiphany. That this made real sense to me (we all have our personal bios of the characters). That to me is the essence of this fic. Um, TMI? Anyway, thank you!