24 May 2011
John takes Ronon on a survival training mission and nothing goes according to plan. Written for Evelyn/Attila for the Sylum Clan Secret Santa challenge.
Updated: 05 May 2009; Published: 29 Dec 2006
I know it's been forever but I wish you could maybe write a third chapter to wrap up the whole story. Love what you have so far!
Author's Response: I know it\'s been a long time and I apologize. I\'d love to say that I\'m working on the next part but I have two stories with deadlines, plus one I\'ve been working on for several years, and I just got a new job. I am, however, planning on working on all my unfinished fics next year.\r\n\r\nI\'m glad you enjoyed it.
Chapter 1: Survival Training
Ronon realizes he wants more than a friendship with John.
Updated: 04 May 2009; Published: 02 May 2009
Two hot guys all wet, cold showers indeed!
A mission that starts out smoothly goes terribly wrong with dire consequences for one member of the expedition.
Updated: 06 Jan 2010; Published: 21 Dec 2009
You have the old woman die in the last chapter but she is alive in this one. Which is it?
Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Harvesters
Ok when John was retelling his story you had him explain the gang rape first when in the previous chapters the business partner was the first to hurt John.
Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Telling of Tales
John spoke of being with Evan the first time since the rape but you have John & Clayton having sex in the wagon that you didn't decribe as rape & that was his last sexual encounter before going back to Atlantis so I'm a little confused there.
Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Home at Last
The Atlanteans get a new trading partner.
Updated: 06 Feb 2010; Published: 01 Feb 2010
Author's Response: Thank you!
Caught with another man's hands on him, John has to face the consequences.
Updated: 08 May 2011; Published: 04 May 2011
Author's Response: lol... he did have a bad day. Thanks for the feedback!
Chapter 1: Consequences and Communication (complete)
In my humble opinion, two of the more attractive men on TV in recent years have been Alex O'Loughlin and Joe Flanigan. O'Loughlin developed the new Steve McGarrett character on the CBS remake of the classic Hawaii Five-O series. Flanigan developed the John Sheppard character on Stargate Atlantis, a television series I still miss. After writing a few separate stories about the two characters I finally decided that it was time to bring the two together. The only problem was that I didn't have a clue how to pull this off. But then inspiration struck and before I realized what was happening I had nearly 150 pages of text and a story I really like. So, good or bad, here is what I came up with to bring together two of my favorite male actors. Enjoy.
Updated: 14 Sep 2011; Published: 19 May 2011
I love the idea of John & Steve together. At first I thought they got together too fast but I liked the banter of the characters so much that I decided I really didn't mind that much after all. I hope you write more with these two or for a while I thought it might be all three & well that isn't bad either. lol
Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - I Want to Go Home