Penname: Telaena [Contact]
Real name: Amanda Member Since: 06 Aug 2011
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Reviews by Telaena

Summary: Sheppard/OMC Connor Davids is a shy, quiet scientist who keeps to himself but over time finds he's lonely. John Sheppard is the man everyone wants and everyone wants to be except all he wants is quiet understanding. Can he get that from the new Dr. Davids? Can they both overcome gender to be with each other?

This story is now complete.

Updated: 29 Oct 2010; Published: 04 Mar 2009
Reviewer: Telaena (Signed)
06 Aug 2011
Hi Ace,

I registered with the site just so I could review this. I bloody well love it. It is one of my favorite stargate fanfictions of all time. I did find an error some where but I can't remember where it was woops. lol. I'm also enjoying the new one. Love your work

Author's Response: Aw, I\'m so glad you liked it, and wow! Thanks for registering just to review. :D I\'m sure there\'s a ton of errors, lol. I wrote most of the fic without a beta reader. *looks shifty* Just fyi, there are a bunch of tiny sequels in the same \'verse on my LJ, if you\'re interested. :) Cheers, Ace
Chapter 1: Arrival

Summary: When Atlantis decide that she does not like, she can be really evil in getting rid of you.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2662; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Aug 2011; Published: 05 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Telaena (Signed)
07 Aug 2011
Love it. I always love the stories where we get to meet Atlantis herself. Although not usually a fan of this level of Sam bashing it was hilarious. Great job guys
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
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Summary: For skidmo_fic's challenge on LJ: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover; #20 with flowers. Slash. Sheppard/?

John Sheppard brought him flowers.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1301; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Apr 2010; Published: 24 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Telaena (Signed)
06 Aug 2011
awwww that one almost got a tear from me... (which coming from me is huge. I rarely cry at stories)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. =D - Cheers, Ace
Chapter 1: With Flowers
Forging Bonds by Belvella [NC-17]
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Summary: In a universe where shape shifters and rangers with super senses are a common occurrence. John finds out that there is someone that he truly wants and realise that he will do what ever it takes to get that one and keep him safe.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 19 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 56076; Completed: No
Updated: 15 Apr 2013; Published: 01 May 2010
Reviewer: Telaena (Signed)
18 Apr 2013
Yay they finally got together. have been waiting for ages for this chapter, but as a writer myself I understand sometimes the muses go mute.
Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Reviewer: Telaena (Signed)
12 Oct 2011
OMG!!! Have I mentioned I love you. I Hang out for every chapter. LOVE!!!
Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Summary: John thought there were some upsides to being on Earth... Okay, so John getting to see Cameron everyday might've been the only one, but still.

Updated: 21 Aug 2011; Published: 17 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Telaena (Signed)
24 Aug 2011
hey, liked the story. cant wait for a sequal. not so sure about the characterisation of John but i still liked it... also this story doesn't need to be rated nc-17 as there is no actual sex involved. It is a bit much for pg-13 so an R would do... although i still think that is abit excessive.

Loved the story, keep on writing

Author's Response: Yeah, the nc-17 was probably a bit much, but I just wanted to be safe. I don\'t know about a sequel now though... I can\'t get past two paragraphs, so maybe it\'s a sign.\r\nPS Thanks for the review!! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, the nc-17 was probably a bit much, but I just wanted to be safe. I don\'t know about a sequel now though... I can\'t get past two paragraphs, so maybe it\'s a sign.\r\nPS Thanks for the review!! :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Ronon forcibly encourages a relationship with Sheppard.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Ronon Dex
Genres: First Time
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2622; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Oct 2011; Published: 16 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Telaena (Signed)
23 Oct 2011
hey, must it is a good one. i would suggest u change the rating the nc-17 though as it has an actualy sec scene in it. Great work
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Whirlwind by Telaena [PG-13]
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Summary: Post almost ascending Rodney recovers memories that were pushed deep into his subconscious. Who is the blonde that he keeps seeing? Why was he calling out the name Cora in his sleep? Rodney is left asking why me?

Categories: Ship Pairings > McKay/Other
Characters: Original Character, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, AU - Alternate Universe, Drama, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Team
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4006; Completed: No
Updated: 28 Jul 2013; Published: 18 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Telaena (Signed)
29 Jul 2013
My brain is a strange place. I have also submitted this story as well as an SG-1 story on and if you want t oread ahead, only 4-5 chapters for whirlwind so far, next chapter up soon.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakened Memories