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Penname: All4Wraith [Contact]
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Something by Cease_Sphire [NC-17]
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Summary: Book Three of the series: The Great Below.
Prior to Michael's escape from M8G-352 Dr. Gwen Reyes confesses to what really happened between Michael and her during his escape attempted which resulted in the death of Sergeant Andrew Cole. Bound by the consequences of her actions, Gwen throws herself into Michael's work at the request of Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard in the hopes to make up for her one mistake. As the years painfully pass and possibly millions in the Pegasus Galaxy suffer under Michael's descent into possible madness and the all-consuming need for revenge, Gwen's love for him twists into hatred. During that time a growing friendship with John becomes one of her few comforts. Now with Atlantis returning from Earth and Michael long dead, John and Gwen struggle to move on but one more of Michael's labs has yet to be explored. (Warning: Character Deaths and Adult Themes)

Updated: 26 Nov 2011; Published: 04 Aug 2011
Reviewer: All4Wraith (Signed)
24 Sep 2011
This is a very interesting story and am looking forward to reading it. For your information, the wraiths feeding hand is always on their right hand, their left hands are clear of the feed slit. You can check this out on Gate World @ Wraith Defenders Club. Where it has been discussed extensively.
Am looking forward to reading the rest soon. :)
Chapter 1: Prologue: Beside You In Time
Reviewer: All4Wraith (Signed)
26 Sep 2011
Interesting so far - but I am curious, how and when did she get pregnant and why is gestation so long, she's not an elephant. Its seems like it is a couple of years and no way would I like to carry a baby that long!

Author's Response: As the story progresses why the gestation takes so long will be explained. I give one now because it would be a spoiler. As for when she became pregnant it was from her encounter with Michael in the story Everything. :)
Chapter 6: Chapter 5: The Way Out Is Through

Summary: Book One of the series: The Great Below
Michael Kenmore before capture, being named and experimented upon by humans had grown up with only a few simple dreams and goals: a burning desire to survive, learn and to never ever disappoint the Queen - his mother or especially the Commander – his father. After his first hunt one fierce human female changes everything.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Michael Kenmore/Other
Characters: Michael Kenmore, Original Character, Other, Todd
Genres: Character Study, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes, Character death
Challenges: Past to Now, Todd the Wraith
Chapters: 9 [Table of Contents]
Series: The Great Below

Word count: 30649; Completed: No
Updated: 28 Jan 2012; Published: 11 Aug 2011
Reviewer: All4Wraith (Signed)
24 Sep 2011
Just read through this story, sounds very interesting. Can you also add this to the site Fanfiction.net. I only on occasion come here when looking for wraith FF, as there really isn't much wraith focused fiction on this site.I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Will do so once the story is completed. :) And thank you for your kind comments.
Chapter 1: Prologue: Eight Seasons - The Sparring Lesson
Reviewer: All4Wraith (Signed)
25 Sep 2011
Great story, looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: The chapters are coming to me a lil slower these days primarily due to a 16 credit course load. I\'ll try to post at least a new chapter every month-sorry for the delay but sooo busy with school atm.
Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Eleven hard years Little to lose