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Penname: Susan [Contact]
Real name: Susan Member Since: 17 Aug 2005
Membership status: Member
Angst junky. I like new and fresh ideas. As the name suggests, I would also like to beta these fresh, original tales of terror and destruction. If your interests are anything like mine, you will enjoy reading Xanthe, Haggy, and especially Darkestangel.
Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Susan

Summary: Where there are whales there must be marine biologists. Her tea cup had made it halfway to her lips before the British project representative across the table from her had uttered those three fateful words.

Aliens. Are. Real.

Updated: 02 Mar 2008; Published: 22 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
16 Dec 2007
I liek how you make her notice how much her situation is just like a classic sci-fi adventure show. It gives the story an element of reality.
Chapter 10: Part 10
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
16 Dec 2007
Love the insight into our favorite character's lives. LOVE the Cadman/Brown/McKay dialog. I also enjoyed all the background into B's life, but now I am ready for the relationships to start blossoming. That doesn't sound right, but you know what I mean. ;)
Chapter 12: Part 12

Summary: "He'd become aware of Chuck's love of risk-taking a couple of weeks into their relationship."

(Carson/Chuck the Canadian gate technician - slash)

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/Other
Characters: Carson Beckett, Other
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2537; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Jul 2007; Published: 30 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
09 Aug 2007
Thank you, thank you for writing a Chuck fic. He is so cute! Please God, write another chapter where Carson mistakes McKay for Chuck. Chuck is Hewlett's stand-in on the show (obviously), and I can already see the shocked expression on Carson's face!!!

Author's Response: I wouldn\'t write it as part of this fic, but it\'s a good idea. I might have to write a ficlet where he makes that mistake... would Rodney be shocked and disgusted or would he enjoy it... hmm...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Jeannie "helps" Rodney pack for his camping trip with John.
Rodney is going to KILL Jeannie!

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, Graphic Novel, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7072; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 May 2013; Published: 31 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
23 Jun 2008
WARNING: Kink-o-meter reaching critical levels. Be advised; your fic is ultra hot. Eye candy and filthy smut are increadible. You had me at, "I can feel us, you know." Sexiest line I've read in months.

Author's Response: Awesome! Thank you! *blushes*\r\n\r\n
Chapter 3: Day Three

Summary: Laura Cadman is abducted off-world and rescued, but her nightmare has only begun as she starts to remember exactly what happened to her and what evil plans the Wraith have in store for humanity.

Updated: 10 Apr 2008; Published: 19 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
02 Oct 2007
Constructive criticism: I would maybe say Ancient Scanning Device (ASD?) rather than MRI. The scanner is better than an MRI. Just an idea. Not very important. :)

Author's Response: Ah, I totally forgot about the ASD. Great idea, thanks!
Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
02 Oct 2007
Ooo, another twist to lead me into the next chapter. I love how you represent Carson!!!! Your use of medical lingo is to be admired as well.

Author's Response: Thanks again. I tried to research as much of the lingo as I could. I hope it is accurate. Carson just has to struggle with it all. :)
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
02 Oct 2007
Oooooo! Very cool beginning. On to read the next chap.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
02 Oct 2007
Ahhh! Scarey! I have been trying to write a story like this (only w/McKay), and I would sue you for copyright infringment if your story wasn't so much better, I could prove that you had read my mind, and if people could copyright fanfics. Awesome story so far.

Author's Response: Really?! Seriously I had wondered if anyone else had thought of this concept before. And in a way, Michael plays with it at the end of S3 on the show, so I plan to incorporate that :) \r\n\r\nPlease do write your story! Who says yours isn\'t great as well?
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
02 Oct 2007
Such good characterization!!!!! I wanted to hit Rodney over the head so bad!

Author's Response: You gotta love Rodney :) I am always glad to hear I got the characterization right.
Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ternion by Claire [NC-17]
[Reviews - 20]

Summary: Completely gratuitous Sheppard/McKay/Lorne double penetration fic.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Ternion

Word count: 858; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Aug 2007; Published: 26 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
20 Nov 2007
LOVE IT! That was so increadibly hot! Uh, that was just amazing. Poor clueless Lorne. I love how John completely controls Rodney, and Lorne just hangs on for the ride.
Chapter 1: One
Broken by Dementi [NC-17]
[Reviews - 40]

Summary: Sheppard deals with the loss of McKay. Only to realize what he has truly lost and that is just not acceptable.

Updated: 05 Feb 2008; Published: 10 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
14 Oct 2007
Main characters should die more often. Personal special request; could you add a penguin to this story? Give it a little something completely unexpected.

Author's Response: I\'ll have to consider your request, as I am not exactly sure how I would be able to incorporate a penguin. But I\'ll see what I can do as this is my first ever request.
Chapter 3: Only more questions...
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
I suggested a penguin because it has absolutely no place in this story. Sometimes, those misplaced items can help you guide a story to someplace you never expected to be. ;) Love ya!

Author's Response: Well, I think that I have found a place...I was inspired! Thanks
Chapter 1: Broken
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
05 Nov 2007
Awwwww, that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Stupid Rodney (let the muses bless him in his stasis chamber). Didn't like the baby pinguens, how could he!

Author's Response: I am glad, but it was your prompt..so I blame it on you.
Chapter 5: Penguins! Oh you have got to be kidding me!
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
05 Nov 2007
You whore! I just compared our stories on the Recent Stories page. Your 3,000 word story has the same number of reviews as my Rising Above which has 20,000 words. *throws hockey gloves from hands* I am freaking jeleous! I grudingly tip my hat to you. Good job!

Author's Response: Wow, I am honored that you want to fight, however, *begins to run.
Chapter 1: Broken
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
05 Nov 2007
I don't have a fansination with pinguins, just thought it was something good and random. Gosh! Now penis, there's a good random word. Look what we did with that! Aww, Dementi loves me. Damn it! I have just added yet another review. Grr! You're beating me!

Author's Response: Shh, or I am going to tell Colonel Penis! I am sorry I am beating you.
Chapter 1: Broken
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
05 Feb 2008
Awwwww, so sappy. I'm all sticky now! :D

Author's Response: *hands Susan a warm wash cloth. You loved it and you know it! Dementi
Chapter 6: You are loved...

Summary: Written for fourth porn battle prompt Rod/John/Rodney: Hidden.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 856; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Sep 2007; Published: 13 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
20 Nov 2007
Hot. Increadibly hot, but I'm sure you already knew that. I didn't realize how increadibly hot TWO Rodney's could be. Uh, love it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Intolerable by anyanka [NC-17]
[Reviews - 25]

Summary: John had never thought of Rodney as cruel before.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7069; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Sep 2007; Published: 15 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
17 Sep 2007
HOTT! This could be one of the hottest fics I've ever read. Thanks for sharing!!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you. I\'m writing more so I hope I can keep up the standard.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Proof by NeeveBrody [NC-17]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: In which John and Rodney debate the validity of a non-penetrative blowjob - and John proves a point!

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1395; Completed: Yes
Updated: 15 Sep 2007; Published: 15 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
17 Sep 2007
That was cool. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Get a grip, John. It was just a nightmare."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9347; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Sep 2007; Published: 17 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Sep 2007
Totally awsome fic from start to finish. This is definately one fic that I did not skim. The scarey elements were terrifying and tasteful. As were the sexy scenes. This story was just great. Look forward to your next great work. Five out of five.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1