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Penname: Susan [Contact]
Real name: Susan Member Since: 17 Aug 2005
Membership status: Member
Angst junky. I like new and fresh ideas. As the name suggests, I would also like to beta these fresh, original tales of terror and destruction. If your interests are anything like mine, you will enjoy reading Xanthe, Haggy, and especially Darkestangel.
Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Susan

Summary: "Behold how the thing which thou hast seen in thy dream is, after a considerable lapse of time, fully realized." Lots of implied Rodney!torture.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult themes, May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1127; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Sep 2007; Published: 18 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Sep 2007
Whhhaaaa! You made me cry! I am so into the Rodney whumping, but this goes too far. I feel so bad for him! Please write more about his heroic recovery with the help of Sheppard. Make him better, pleeease!

Great story!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Torchwood/SGA crossover, future-fic set post-season 1 Torchwood and post-season 3 Atlantis. Just a bit of fluff/smut in my Beatles 'verse. Set sometime after Eight Days A Week and before Ask Me Why.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Beatles 'verse

Word count: 1831; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Oct 2007; Published: 06 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
11 Oct 2007
In the spirit of constructive criticism, I think this story lacks in the plot department. It is a great exercise in slash, though. I heart poor little Ianto. ;)

Author's Response: Constructive criticism is always welcome, though I feel I must point out that this was meant to be PWP. It\'s a snippet from a larger \'verse, but isn\'t really meant to move the plot along at all. Just a little snapshot, if you will. Thanks for reading!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Chocolate Henna by skidmo [NC-17]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: Torchwood/SGA crossover, not set in the Beatles 'verse. Lorne/Ianto

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3198; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Oct 2007; Published: 06 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
11 Oct 2007
Cute story, but what would realy intrigue me is how these two characters met. I am glad that Ianto has a good friend who cares about him. Stupid Jack.

Author's Response: This story isn\'t actually set in my Beatles \'verse (it was just written for a friend who wanted to see this pairing), but if you read Eight Days a Week in that \'verse, it\'s a story of how Ianto and Lorne met.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
13 Oct 2007
Gotcha.

Author's Response: :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney recieves a fate worse than death when he attempts to help an ally.

Categories: General
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Drama, Hurt Comfort, Series, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2159; Completed: No
Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 12 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
13 Oct 2007
This sounds like and actual episode. Can't wait to see where you take us.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Babies by anne isabelle [NC-17]
[Reviews - 14]

Summary: McKay returns to Atlantis after the ordeal of being captured off-world...

Updated: 17 Oct 2007; Published: 13 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
14 Oct 2007
Ah, I am so happy to have another mprg story in the universe.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your FB Susan. Next update soon.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
18 Oct 2007
Okay, you have just crossed a line. Characters should NEVER speak of the fanfiction that they are currently in! That just freaked the poop out of me! Thanks for the great conclusion!

Author's Response: I know, I know. But couldn\'t resist the temptation. Sorry :-) Thank you very much for your FB Susan.
Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Summary: Earth!crack. Following Sheppard through all the SGC craziness. Plus: Ancient Devices, Injured!Jack, Sexy!Rodney, Amnesia, Pom-poms, and Stealth!Teal'c.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter, Teal'c, Vala Mal Doran
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2167; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Oct 2007; Published: 14 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
14 Oct 2007
That was a lot of fun. Sheppard is so weird. RM and JS are so cute together.

Author's Response: Haha, excellent! As fun is what I was going for. Sheppard is weird, but that\'s why I love him. :D
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Second Best by Madison [NC-17]
[Reviews - 27]

Summary: Rodney knows...he's done the math. Atlantis *needs* a John Sheppard.

Updated: 14 Oct 2007; Published: 14 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
14 Oct 2007
I loved that first hotel room scene. SO Funny!

Author's Response: Well, J is a little bit of a bad boy, isn\'t he? I\'m glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your review--feedback just primes to pump to go and write more...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Somebody somewhere had never seen a Lorne non-con. Here it be.

Updated: 30 Oct 2008; Published: 15 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
18 Oct 2007
This story is absolutely excellent from beginning to end. Even though I want the torture to continue, this story can easily stand alone. Very excellent job. I am looking for more of your stories right now!
Chapter 1: Disoriented
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Nice! Thanks for writing more. Though, think this chapter falls in the shadow of the previous chapter. I am recommending this story to all of my readers. Very emotionally intense. Thanks Crazy.
Chapter 2: Signs
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
"The last thing in the world that Carson Beckett ever expected to see was the sight of two military officers, a CO and his XO, in the same bed and in such proximity to each other." Awkward! Very cool.
Chapter 2: Signs
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
24 Oct 2007
Aww, that was so sweet until I thought something bad was going to happen. I did not expect Ronon to do that! Moooore!
Chapter 3: Forging Ahead
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
22 Feb 2008
Love it still. Thanks for posting it. When a story gets long, it is difficult to keep all the themes running, but I think you've found your stride again.
Chapter 5: Two Steps Back

Summary: What could have happened after the events of "Trinity" Warning character death! Suicide! If you could be affected by this you better look away! Rated NC-17 to be safe!

Categories: General
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Episode Related
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1975; Completed: No
Updated: 21 Oct 2007; Published: 19 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Wipes tear away
Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Summary: mild spoilers for 'doppelganger'. "More hot girls? McKay is such an idiot."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1053; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Oct 2007; Published: 20 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Very hot and very sweet. Thanks so much for sharing your candy with the rest of the class.

Author's Response: Candy is meant to be shared, after all. Thank you!
Chapter 1: and then afterwards
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Yeah! GBaby has a point. This was akward and hot all at once. Very, very good job.
Chapter 1: and then afterwards

Summary: The fallout of a hellish mission; Sheppard/Lorne. Probably PWP with angst.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Drama, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 310; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Oct 2007; Published: 20 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Awww, I need sweet comfort sex now.

Author's Response: With that, there could quite possibly be another chapter or a sequel. :]
Chapter 1: Right Where I'm Supposed to Be

Summary: Caldwell has something Sheppard needs, but Sheppard has to be willing to take it.
This is a Caldwell Sheppard story folks warts and all.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Steven Caldwell
Genres: Angst, First Time, Friendship, Pre-slash
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 8 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 26155; Completed: No
Updated: 16 Nov 2008; Published: 20 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
You better be hard at work at your computer right now, working on the next chapter!!! That was humilliating and disgusting! More, damn it. This is truely in the spirit of Xanthe (may the muses bless her pen), and I am enjoying everything.

Author's Response: Xanthe has been badly hurt and her muse has taken a battering from some very unkind people I think. Although she has written a wonderful Dr Who fic last month. The first she has written in a long time. Its just sad that people who have nothing nice to say actually have to say anything at all imho....they can put someone as imaginative as Xanthe off of writing spoiling it for those of us who love her work. People need to remember this IS fiction and it can be anything the author wants it to be. Its their story, just a story. Meant to be nothing more than entertaining. If I entertained you with this first chapter then I guess I did ok :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Amen! I want that written down somewhere important. I did not know that about Xanthe! She is the best! I am sad now. Check your email because I am going to send you a message. I want to talk more about this! :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1