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Penname: Susan [Contact]
Real name: Susan Member Since: 17 Aug 2005
Membership status: Member
Angst junky. I like new and fresh ideas. As the name suggests, I would also like to beta these fresh, original tales of terror and destruction. If your interests are anything like mine, you will enjoy reading Xanthe, Haggy, and especially Darkestangel.
Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Susan

Summary: Caldwell has something Sheppard needs, but Sheppard has to be willing to take it.
This is a Caldwell Sheppard story folks warts and all.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Steven Caldwell
Genres: Angst, First Time, Friendship, Pre-slash
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 8 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 26155; Completed: No
Updated: 16 Nov 2008; Published: 20 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
05 Nov 2007
FYI, seach for 'im' and replace it with 'him'. God, I love your writting. It reads like an actual episode. Everything is so clear and easy to understand. It is such a relief from most fanfictions (not to bad-talk everyone else's work), but still! Thank you! Now more sex.

Author's Response: Will do thanks for that :)
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
13 Nov 2007
OMG, Haggy, you have out done yourself. That mission was brutal, and I needed a good dom to tell me what to do after that! I am so in love with Caldwell and how he is taking things so slowly for John. LOVE IT! Write faster!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I needed something that would break John a bit. I figured losing the team would just about be enough ~H~
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
03 Dec 2007
Teeease! Slash next time, yes? Please say yes. This chap was very heart warming. I am really seeing Caldwell as a very deeply caring CO and dom. Uh, I can't wait for the hot sexiness. FYI Typo - "Isn't it kind of early for you to be finished work?" Is the missing word "with"?
Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
11 Mar 2008
"I like to keep my submissive's ass well occupied, so you can count on this area of your body receiving a lot of attention." I melted when I read that. As always, a perfectly written, perfectly proportioned BDSM chapter. Thank you so much for posting a new chapter! Do you know when you'll have the next one up?

Author's Response: um working on it, hopefully they won\'t be as stubborn about letting me know what they are going to do next :) Thanks for keeping with it ~H~
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Silk by Mistress Kat [PG]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: Carson likes his comforts.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 106; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Oct 2007; Published: 21 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Awww! Sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: By now it's routine.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, Rodney McKay
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 105; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Oct 2007; Published: 21 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Oh, that just opens a can of worms!

Author's Response: Hee, it does, doesn\'t it?
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Psycho by Kuna Yashmaa [PG-13]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: "Antisocial personality disorder is often misunderstood by both professionals and laypeople."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Character Study
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 785; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Oct 2007; Published: 21 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
To help with this arguement, I suggest that a person can be a complete psycho in there head, but not in their actions. This story could be showing what John is really thinking, and the crystal creature lets those thoughts roam free.

Author's Response: *the crystal creature lets those thoughts roam free*\r\n:) Oh, my God... You thought that *too*? I didn\'t tell anyone, because people tend to throw stones at me when I ask inconvenient questions, but you know, I thought if that crystal creature would jump (hit?) Sam instead of Sheppard, everybody would dream… I don’t know – two-directional wormholes? Pink bunny-shaped slippers? Fish in the fishless pond? \r\nBut to be honest, I wrote this story right after 4.01, before I saw 4.04.\r\n *complete psycho in there head, but not in their actions* I\'ve recently read about a group of children with ASPD and very high IQs, and the teacher claimed that when those children could observe behavior of regular kids, they could mimic it perfectly. They learned what would be approved/disapproved by the teacher, and the next day you couldn’t tell them apart from the normal kids. Sheppard is absolutely brilliant with that, he is a perfect judge of character – how fast he found Carter’s soft spots? He didn’t know her at all! He learned by poking and probing. \r\n
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: It was moments like these that he liked the best. When afterwards, they were able to curl around each other and just listen to the other one breathe.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Zelenka
Characters: John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 710; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Oct 2007; Published: 21 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
I have to admit, I inicially only read this story because it had your name on it. Very hot, and I am glad to see a Sheppard combination other than Rodney or Elizabeth. I think Radek is greatly under used as a lover.

Author's Response: Really? You inicially read it just because it had my name on it? Wow. Thanks. ^_^ Glad you liked it. And I so know what you mean! I just had to write something about Radek and John, cause I think those two are so cute together.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
I'd love to hash out some original ideas with you. I hate reading the same fanfiction over and over again. Send me an message on the "contact author" thing because I'd love to converse with you.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney got his new SX-7 two weeks after he'd ordered it. Him. It. Whatever.

In which John is an android.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time, Humour, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 9 [Table of Contents]
Series: Scruffy AI

Word count: 9959; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Feb 2010; Published: 22 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
24 Oct 2007
HOTTT!!! So machanical and mechonized, but so unbelievably hoooootttt! I love it so much! Thank you for writing it! Now where can I get my own model?

Author's Response: Seems the website is down because there were too many orders. Shame, really. ;p\r\nThank you for commenting!
Chapter 1: 1. Delivery
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
29 Oct 2007
I love this version of the AU. Things seem to look much better for Rodney than his real life in Siberia. I can actually believe that Sheppard is a robot than a human being. It would make so much more sense.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think he just decided to quit the SGC after they threatened to have him deported. ;) He\'s still working with them, though.
Chapter 2: 2. AI
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
29 Oct 2007
Oh, god, I hope this means there will be more chapters. Poor, pathetic Rodney!
Male Enhancement (Tin Man Version)
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
29 Oct 2007
Darklady definately has a point, but somehow, I don't see Rodney trying to bring John up on charges. I think he'd be too embarassed. I'm still trying to figure out why John even acted like a robot in the first place. B is so much more angsty, but a was so less confusing. I'm going back to chapter one to just enjoy the simple Robot/Master fun!

Author's Response: I hope I can clear everything up for you. :)
Chapter 1: 1. Delivery
Sweet Dreams by MusIgneus [NC-17]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: Sheppard had cheated him out of two comfortable situations now. Of course he was thinking about revenge; he just hadn't realized it could be so...pleasant.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Other
Genres: Character Study, Episode Related
Warnings: Adult themes, Non-consensual
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 553; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Oct 2007; Published: 22 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
24 Oct 2007
NICE! You can read into the episode that this kind of thing must have happened while he was on Atlantis. I am so glad that someone wrote it! Very creepy and hot at the same time!!!! LOVE IT!

Author's Response: I think it\'s all too possible something like this could have happened while Lucius was on Atlantis (or other places, for that matter). He seemed like a pretty nasty predator to me!\r\n\r\nI\'m delighted you found the story effective. Thanks for letting me know what you thought of it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Lorne Lost by bridgie0202 [NC-17]
[Reviews - 42]

Summary: Lorne is missing. Sheppard goes after him at first thinking it would be just a routine rescue mission, but soon realizes finding Lorne is going to be harder than he's okay with. Lorne wakes up in a cell and can't remember where home is, his only clues are the patch on his jacket and the memory of a man with wild hair and a sexy smile.

Updated: 13 Dec 2008; Published: 22 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
16 Dec 2007
How close are we getting to the end?

Author's Response: It\'s almost over. two chapters to go. is it just dragging on now?\r\n
Chapter 14: Who's with who?
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
17 Dec 2007
Oy vey the angst! You could cut it with a knife!
Chapter 12: Emotional ends
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
17 Dec 2007
I should appologize I didn't give this story the time it desirved, and I just tried to skim through it. I really did enjoy it. Angst is always good in my book. Even if it takes dozens of chapters. Now that is the perfect ending, "What happens off world, stays off world." That was definately a sweet ending! Thanks for updating so much so fast.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It makes it hard to keep up. It got confusing for a lot of people when my muse went into overdrive and all of a sudden there were 5 new chapters. I loved the ending though. I just thought it fit!
Chapter 15: All is well and right with the world, in our galaxy anyway...
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
17 Dec 2007
Okay, now wait. I want C/L/S threesome now. You can't make that couple and not show them all naked together in the bedroom!

Author's Response: Okay, well...I thought that too. While trying to write all of the angst I wrote a side project you\'ll see soon. It\'s nothing but bedroom time from word one to the end. :-) \r\nI also just started a short on a \"return trip.\" I don\'t know exactly where it\'s going yet, but hopefully you\'ll see Cam coming back to Atlantis for one of his \"six week\" visits.
Chapter 1: Lost not found

Summary: They were good reasons. Excellent reasons even, according to John.

That's what mattered. (kinda like an epilogue of sorts to the series: Paper Flowers)4/3

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Friendship, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Paper Flowers

Word count: 1073; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Oct 2007; Published: 27 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
29 Oct 2007
Awww! Rodney is so cute, needing John that way. Ohhh!

Author's Response: ^_^ yeah, I know. Isn\'t he?
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Something came up, so Laura has to find a way to tell Carson just why she didn't return to Earth on the Daedalus. And she finds herself confiding in last person she'd expect to.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Beckett/Other
Characters: Carson Beckett, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge, Drama, Episode Related, Established Relationship, Friendship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4274; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Oct 2007; Published: 29 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
29 Oct 2007
THE END!?!?!??! Oh, no you don't! I am seriously screaming at the computer right now! You sit your butt right back down at the keyboard and get working! How does Carson respond? Does Laura stay on Atlantis? What about when Carson says they aren't together late in the series? What about when Carson . . . and Sunday . . . and the sad bagpipes . . .

God, just keep writing!!!!

Author's Response: I am writing, I promise! I have set aside my other story in place of this bunny. It\'s hopping just fine.
Chapter 1: A Critical Mess