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Penname: Susan [Contact]
Real name: Susan Member Since: 17 Aug 2005
Membership status: Member
Angst junky. I like new and fresh ideas. As the name suggests, I would also like to beta these fresh, original tales of terror and destruction. If your interests are anything like mine, you will enjoy reading Xanthe, Haggy, and especially Darkestangel.
Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Susan

Summary: "So what you're saying," Sheppard said, "is that you're here for reasons..." Chuck cut him off. "Please don't say it, sir."

Categories: General
Characters: Other
Genres: Challenge, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Dramatic Exit

Word count: 1169; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Jan 2008; Published: 07 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
08 Jan 2008
"What kind of lame-ass alien overlord lives in a moose?" OH MY God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Funniest story EVER, EVER, EVER!!!!!!! Holy crap that was funny as hell. "This never happens to SG-1." Holy crap with icecream. Thank you SOOOO much for sharing.

Author's Response: *grin* Thanks!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Tied by the_cephalopod [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: A vague attempt at plot, but then Rodney gets down to business and ties up a very willing John... Warning for mild bondage.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3647; Completed: Yes
Updated: 09 Jan 2008; Published: 09 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
11 Jan 2008
very hot. Thanks for sharing. Glad the muse struck you with porn. Plot is for people with time.

Author's Response: :) I\'m very glad you enjoyed it. Also, \"plot is for people with time\" - love it!! cep xxx
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Private Moment by Ciar [NC-17]
[Reviews - 22]

Summary: Rodney spends some intense personal time with a memento of John.
John spends some intense personal time with thoughts of Rodney.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Vignette
Warnings: Adult themes, May squick
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2842; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Jan 2008; Published: 20 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
06 Mar 2008
A Rodney's queen moved to A4, he shifted to a more comfortable position on the bed. But there was a clanking, crashing sound from under his bed, and something black and a nearly empty bottle rolled out from the dark annanymity of his bed. John looked down, looked at Rodney, and then asked, "Is that a mold of a fist? Is that my fist? Why would you have lube and ---" TBC

Author's Response: Damn you, you\'ve given me a plot bunny!!!! Now I have to spend time thinking porny thoughts about John with Rodney in order to get this plot bunny to turn into a story - how could you be so cruel to me?!?!?! :D
Chapter 2: Private Moment (John)

Summary: Written for the Porn Battle V. Prompt: girl!John/Rodney, want. - "Ten," he whispers. "Told you."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 549; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Jan 2008; Published: 21 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
01 Feb 2008
Thanks so much for that. The shortness totally makes it all the better. Love that Rodney is making John have so many orgasms. It would probably ruin the story as it is, but I would love to hear how John got his genitles mixed up.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1
Tied by crazywriter10 [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: Could also be titled "How Major Lorne Lost His Kink and Then Found It Again". Contains: Ropes, Rabbit-Squirrels, and Evan/Ronon sex. (In that order.)

Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 22 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
01 Feb 2008
Awesome! Love the way Ronon just took comlete control of Evan's sex life. There is nothing that drives me crazier that blood being found after sex. Love the way Lorne is totally freaking out, but bearing through it all. Must have second chapter NOW!

Author's Response: I will definitely try to have that second chapter up as soon as possible. And thank you so much for the review and for liking the story. :]
Chapter 1: How It Was Lost

Summary: Two months after That Sunday, Rodney confronts his truth. (Sunday spoilers, AU)

Updated: 25 Jan 2008; Published: 25 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
01 Feb 2008
I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed this story. You were smart to begin your story where readers were already highly emotionally attached. I honestly skipped over your story several times because it said, "Tag for Sunday", and I never want to read anything about Carson death EVER, but my god! You have created a masterpeice. I am recommending your story to everyone I can think of! Oh, if only more people were into SGA or slash for that matter. You characters, plot, scene, everything was so believable. Those small touches were the Canadian Royal Airforce or whatever, just all those extra details added so much to the quality of your story. No one ever thinks to write down the name of the drug someone is taking. Carson and Rodney's relationship was believable from start to finish partly because I wanted to hold and kiss Carson and cover him with articles of my clothing. I have to admit that I did have to pause quite a bit between paragraphs to have a bit of a cry. I was sniffley all night. I tried to stay up all night to finish story, but I had to come back the next morning to finish it. I kept waiting for Carson to turn into some kind of Trojan horse or die again, but I am so happy with how you set them right back into their old positions. I know you probably don't want to come back to this monster/masterpeice, but hey, if you are looking for ideas for a sequal, I would thoroughly enjoy an mpreg written by you. It seems like the next logical step in their relationship. Uh, you now stand as my favorite author and favorite story. Congradulations on your work!

Author's Response: Thank you Susan -- that\'s quite the review, and quite the compliment. I have a lot of work to do with Moments Sacred and Profane, so I probably won\'t revisit this one. Unfortunately, I\'m not much of an mpreg fan, so it\'s highly unlikely I\'ll ever write one. I tend to squick at that type of story, so writing one would be extremely difficult for me.\r\n\r\nI knew that the whole \"tag for Sunday\" and character death warning were likely to put people off, but I felt I had to be honest with my readers. Carson *was* dead at the beginning of the story. But for the folks who love Carson and are willing to read it, they get themselves a happy ending. I tend to be very much a happy ending kind of rodent, so fear not! Most of my stories end on an up note. There\'s enough misery in the world without me adding more to it with stories that end badly.\r\n\r\n*hands you tissues and hugs you*\r\n\r\nThanks so much for reading, and for the lovely review!
Chapter 1: The Burning of Your Sorrow

Summary: John and Rodney deal with the aftermath of 'Miller's Crossing', and their ever swelling feelings for each other. OR Sex in an elevator, Rodney-whumping, and John falling for Rodney in a sappy, masculine, dominating sex-capade.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, First Time, Humour, Hurt Comfort, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Romance
Warnings: May squick, Non-consensual
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4645; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Feb 2008; Published: 01 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
05 Feb 2008
My god, you can read this story half a dozen different ways. The other night I read it as serious, then it became overwhelmingly funny, and this last time I read it, it was seriously romantic. I also realized that Rodney never deleted the file. Dun, dun, daaaah!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
20 Jun 2008
Rodney was warm and content. He basked in the twilight between wake in sleep, knowing that he was in John's arm and free from guilt or fear.

Then the door slammed open.

Rodney scrambled for the sheet to cover his exposed body, but it was pinned under John's body.

A man in a green uniform and black boots shouted, 'Lt. Colonel John Sheppard, you are hearby under arrest under Article 19 Section 8 of the Officer's Code of Conduct."

Two other soldiers rounded the bed and grabbed John's arms.

"No, no, no! This is my fault, please don't! Please!" Rodney cried.

The soldier continued, "You have the right to representation. You will be judged by a ruling of a court martial. You . . ."

Naked, Rodney clawed at the officers restraining John. "Please, let him go! Don't do this!"

John kept his head down, but growled. "Stop it, Rodney!"

The soldiers pushed Rodney away and gave him such looks of disgust that Rodney's stomach twinged in pain. They haphazardly pulled a pair of pants on John and dragged him out of the room.
Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Summary: John gritted his teeth as the Wraith bent down, lifted him up and pinned him against the wall of the cave opening, one hand around his throat, the other ripping his shirt open.

Updated: 21 May 2008; Published: 02 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
04 Feb 2008
Since you write introspection of the characters so well, you might consider writing McKay's disbelief when they can't find John, and finally Rodney's mourning when they find John's body. If you want to go for a trilogy, bring John back to life from an acended being. Dun, dun, daaaa, you've just started an epic story!

Author's Response: I could do that! I may eventually, I wrote this a while ago in my holidays so I might have to wait till I have some more spare time. Thanks for reviewing!
Chapter 1: Sacrifices

Summary: Midnight skin, dark and shiny, slick with sweat and rippling muscles. Eyes closed, mouths curved in smiles of bliss. They danced.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 100; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Feb 2008; Published: 02 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
04 Feb 2008
Yep this is your sequal. John is dead, and this is the afterlife. I think the mirror confuses me because I don't know if he is in his bathroom alone or if he is in a dance studio or something. This is great how you just give snippetts. You've really hooked your audience.

Author's Response: Well I wanted it to be a drabble so I couldn\'t put too much detail in it. I really like how it turned out, much better than it sounded in my head. And Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Words have never been John Sheppard's strong point.

She looked at him and raised her eyebrows a fraction, then repeated the name into the phone before asking. "Is his harness ready? Minimal. Shoes and halter. Chest harness. Hmm." She turned to Rodney. "Tail?"

"Um, er, tail?" He tried not to embarrass John by fainting at the thought, but it was a near thing. He was pretty sure his voice had cracked.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5140; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Feb 2008; Published: 02 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
05 Feb 2008
Big applause for originality. Be assured there are few of these stories in this fandom, oh queen of kink. I had my hand over my mouth the entire time. The only way I could read it without gagging too much was to pretend John was a real horse. I think I only blacked out once. Excellent originality!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Just A Postcard by Raven [PG-13]
[Reviews - 30]

Summary: Rodney wondered if anyone else got a postcard in their email.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Other
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Graphic Novel, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1077; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Apr 2008; Published: 19 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
08 Mar 2008
No you didn't! Oh, I have goosebumps, and I'm still not sure why. Onto the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hrm. Goosebumps you say? Might want to get checked out by a doctor. :3
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
08 Mar 2008
Oh, boy, oh, boy! Is he going to find out who the guy is? Rubs hands in antisipation for the next chapter and pic. You have been a busy bee!

Author's Response: :3 Glad you like. I\'m still working on the next chapter, meaning finding the right pic, writing down the words... :3
Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Summary: Rodney and John are household pets: two guinea pigs. The scientific name of the common species is Cavia porcellus...

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Radek Zelenka, Ronon Dex
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5032; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Feb 2008; Published: 20 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
22 Feb 2008
I have to admit, I've been reading your stories for a long time, and some of the fics are hits and a few are misses. But when you hit, you HIT! This is one of the most fantasic fics you've written. I think the premmis has set a few readers off, but man, this is truely a great semi-au fic! LOVED how John mounted Rodney in a masculine, non-sexual manner. Rodney's rear is too cute!!! LOVE IT!!!!

Author's Response: Hi Susan, ** flushing with pleasure ** thank you very much for your great feedback :-)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A poem I wrote. I am a victim of the Wraith.

Categories: General
Characters: Original Character
Genres: Drabble, Poetry
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 101; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Feb 2008; Published: 22 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
22 Feb 2008
Wow, um. I can honestly say that this is ORIGINAL. Few people have illustrated death by wraith as you have.

Author's Response: Thanks, I really like expressing certain views in poems, and i\'m glad that you think I got the message across!
Chapter 1: Victim of a Wraith

Summary: "Get the men inside," Pentau ground out. "This is no place for them."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Study, Drama, Established Relationship, Team, Vignette
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8252; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Feb 2008; Published: 25 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
29 Feb 2008
That was a very impressive fic. You made this planet and culture so bright and colorful. It really felt like an actual episode. I truely appreciate reading that. Needless to say your slash scene was very, very hot. I'm off to search for more written by you!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ve written a lot of different kinds of SGA stories, so I hope you find something else that you like.
Chapter 1: Diplomacy in Waltz Tempo
Classical Gas by Geonn [NC-17]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: A brief AU of Trio picking up from what I THOUGHT might happen at one point. :D Sam/Jennifer

Categories: Ship Pairings > Carter/McKay, Slash Pairings > Carter/Keller
Characters: Jennifer Keller, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1780; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Feb 2008; Published: 26 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
29 Feb 2008
I very much love the fact that you've taken your idea formed while watching the ep and turned it into a bonified fic. And a very well written fic at that.

Author's Response: Yes, that\'s just how my twisted little fan-mind works. ;-D I was hoping the gas would make them loopy and we\'d get to see a giggly-Sam, but alas. Only in fic! I\'m glad you enjoyed it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Illustrated alphabet of death. Complete crack and yet manages to have spoilers for all four seasons.

Categories: General
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Graphic Novel, Poetry, Team
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Mar 2008; Published: 07 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
08 Mar 2008
Are you kidding? You should be charging $24.95 a pop! I'm serious, and this is obvious to everyone, this is a freaking awesome peice. The pictures are fantastic and so adorible. I am so saddened and doubling over in laugher. Every line is so clever and horrific. I have sent links to everyone I ever knew to come take a look. I bet if you forwarded this to some of the higher ups of the show, they could figure out a way for you to market this. I cannot tell you how lucky I was to find this. Normally, I would have skipped over this fic, but I totally happened upon it by chance. Again, thank you SOOOO much for posting!!!!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
10 Mar 2008
When will the line of plushies become avalible?
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: He was breaking. And he knew it.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Team
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 615; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Apr 2008; Published: 08 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
10 Mar 2008
It is so refreshing to see characters die. Now if they would only stay dead. Minus Carson. Carson dying sucks. Sucks HARD. So glad you didn't kill Carson. Can we assume that your dead man assended?

Author's Response: *whispers* Well, I never said he was dead, just that he was fatally bleeding all over the place... :3
Chapter 1: Chapter 1