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Penname: Susan [Contact]
Real name: Susan Member Since: 17 Aug 2005
Membership status: Member
Angst junky. I like new and fresh ideas. As the name suggests, I would also like to beta these fresh, original tales of terror and destruction. If your interests are anything like mine, you will enjoy reading Xanthe, Haggy, and especially Darkestangel.
Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Susan
At Gunpoint by out_there [NC-17]
[Reviews - 20]

Summary: "Strip." The Beretta's on John's skin again, the heat of the muzzle sliding over the side of John's jaw. "Jacket first."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2095; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Jan 2006; Published: 03 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
06 Jan 2006
Sergeant Bates glanced at the six security monitors of the various rec rooms and mess hall while he read "A Dumbies Guide to Controling Your Anger." Mess hall: full, gym: Cadman has one hell of an ass on the thigh machine, shooting area: Sheppard shooting, and McKay watching - nothing unusual. "Count to ten and let the anger drift away before confronting others." Mess hall: was that now three entire pizza pies for Ronan? Gym: Holy mother of all that is sexy, Cadman on the breast machine. Still on the breast machine. Shooting area: McKay aiming a gun at Sheppard - nothing unusal. Oh, sweet Mary, another rep on the breast machine. Oh, boy, it's cold in the gym, too. That's it, work those muscles, baby. Oh, yeah. Shooting area: McKay pointing a gun at a gagged, naked Sheppard. "HOLY SH*T!" Cadman on the breast machine. Cadman still on the breast machine. A tap on the radio, Cadman on the breast machine, "Security to," Cadman on the breast machine, "to the shooting range!"

Author's Response: *laughs* Being rewarded for fic with fic. That's very cool. Thanks!
Chapter 1:

Summary: "He suspects it's the only thing keeping him from falling off the knife's edge."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3304; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Jan 2006; Published: 03 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
06 Jan 2006
WOW. I had to really read that three times to really get it, and it was different all three times. What a piece of art. Like one of those sculptures that have to be seen from eight different angles to really be appreciated. Great work.

Author's Response: Thank you. I like the sculpture analogy - makes me all squirmy and happy :) I'm glad you enjoyed.
Chapter 1: Knife's Edge

Summary: "Rodney looked great like this. On his back, with his dark shirt pulled up just enough to show the small trail of hair that led from his navel down."

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 721; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Jan 2006; Published: 04 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
04 Jan 2006
Cute and HOTTT!
Chapter 1: Prompt 4 - 'Lube'

Summary: A little story for lorellipsis...

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 321; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Jan 2006; Published: 08 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
09 Jan 2006
"It'll be a great day, Rodney." --- Laughs*

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)
Chapter 1: 1/1
Darkness by Mckay [G]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: Spoilers for the hive and lost boys. Mckay thoughts after what happend to him in the hive.

Categories: General
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 862; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Jan 2006; Published: 10 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
10 Jan 2006
Yes, he would fall into the darkness. McKay threw himself over the balcany and into the icey sea water.
Chapter 1: 1
Distractions by Honolulu [NC-17]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: Coming back from a group of women called the Myrine, Elizabeth finds herself acting strange around several men in Atlantis.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Weir
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Original Character, Other, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3099; Completed: No
Updated: 12 Jan 2006; Published: 10 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
10 Jan 2006
Hehehehehe! Oh, great story. Great subplot, great steamy scenes, great character development! Oh, more soon! What is going to happen to John, hehehe. Amazon's, gotta love 'em.
Chapter 2: Victim #1

Summary: Almost completely plotless porn, John and Rodney prove to each other that they're still alive

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1231; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Jan 2006; Published: 10 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
10 Jan 2006
pouts* Hot and sad. Like sweet and sour, tastes so good.
Chapter 1: Making the Most of It
Winds of Change by Mystic [NC-17]
[Reviews - 18]

Summary: (Sequel to: The Privateer by Sandy) John had promised he'd never see his father again, but two years later he's back in England and about to be married.

Updated: 11 Jan 2006; Published: 10 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
11 Jan 2006
Awwww! *cries* That was so cute. The ending was so increadible. *Kisses Carson* So freaking cute!!! I would suggest that you go back and edit a bit and maybe chop it up into multiple chapters. Some of us have only human grade eye balls and need to rest them every once and a while. This was totally worth my whole day just reading one fic.

Author's Response: Thank you for the sacrafice and since my next story is already as long as this one and only 1/3 done, I most definitly add chapters for you. I'm glad you enjoyed this adventure and thank you for the feedback, made my day.
Chapter 1: One/one
Class 6 by Dianann [NC-17]
[Reviews - 31]

Summary: A chance meeting before John and Rodney ever met in Rising.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Angst, First Time, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6252; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Jan 2006; Published: 21 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
24 Jan 2006
wipes tear. Beautiful.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: An accident with Ancient technology sucks a John and Rodney from an alternate universe onto Atlantis - and they have very different ideas about sex, marriage and relationships. Consensual BDSM, spanking and kinky themes explored during the course of this story.

Updated: 16 Nov 2012; Published: 06 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
07 Mar 2006
All hail Queen Xanthe of Great Fanfiction! Once again, you have taken concepts and storylines that would have squicked even the bravest of us and made into a great h/c love story. Great job. Love you, Xanthe!!!!

Author's Response: Oh you're always so nice to me, Susan! LOL! Thanks for your feedback :-)
Chapter 1: Chapter One - Making History
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
09 Mar 2006
Nails firmly implanted between teeth (at least when I am not typing reviews). Oh, I am so holding out on the idead that Rodney has no idea that Sheppard is in love! Great job. You have proven your worth for the title of Queen of all greath fanfiction again.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun playing with all that UST!
General & Dr Sheppard
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
09 Mar 2006
Okay, I am only up to chapter nine, but I can't believe how hot you have made this fic. I needed a tranquilizer! I also can't believe how well you have captured the characters SO WELL! Gosh, if only you write for the show. I love Rodney's snarky behavior and you carry it through the entire story even as he is changing. Alright, will you just write a book already?! (Returns to biting nails for chapter 10.)

Author's Response: Thank you especially re the characterisation as that's tricky over such a long story, esp when the events of the story are essentially changing them so phew - I'm glad that worked for you!
Chapter 1: Chapter One - Making History
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
09 Mar 2006
Ahh! Rodney's in so much pain. Sheppard's in so much pain. Yeah! Oh how I love the angst.

Author's Response: LOL! I'm quite the angst bunny myself!
General & Dr Sheppard
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
09 Mar 2006
Okay, Xanthe. I hope you don't mind, but your review page is now officially a forum. -- Jean, you are so freaking right! I think that is part of the appeal for the writers of the show. He is always right but his ideas don't follow the fanciful nature of the increadibly rediculous plotlines, so he has become a symbol to beat down our own doubts about the show. Plus, I think the actors and staff actually like the actor who plays him and wanted him back this season. --Almond, check your email. Alyse's email is alyse@ unconsciousmind.co.uk. -- Krysalys, I am missing you at my review page for "Lost But Not Little Boys." :flutters eye lashes and pouts: Come say hi? -- All Hail Queen Xanthe!

Author's Response: Oh that's a very good point Susan - about the way they use Kavanagh to beat down our own doubts! And on the commentaries it was clear that the guy who plays Kavanagh is really nice and they all like him.
Chapter 1: Chapter One - Making History
Storm Clouds by Morgan [NC-17]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: There's a storm coming...

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Weir
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2017; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Mar 2006; Published: 06 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
07 Mar 2006
THEIF!!! Only you did it tons better than mine. Nice work!
Chapter 1: Storm Clouds

Summary: Eavesdrop on girl's poker night. Snippets of conversation...Spoilers: Duet...PG-13 for language.

Categories: General
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Original Character, Other
Genres: Friendship, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Sista's Doin' It For Themselves

Word count: 3934; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Mar 2006; Published: 07 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
07 Mar 2006
Laugh my freaking ass off! Good job. Man that was a good time. Oh, if only I could be at that poker game. Katie would have a run for her money. Or Laura, or Elizabeth. Oh, I can't make up my mind. Great job. This was a great laugh.
Chapter 1: 1

Summary: Everyone has a breaking point. In the midst of the siege of Atlantis, Elizabeth couldn't afford to break. So, she forgot... First two chapters "G". Rating for part three.

Categories: Bitextual
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9778; Completed: No
Updated: 10 Mar 2006; Published: 09 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
14 Mar 2006
FINISH THIS STORY!!! Oh, my gosh, so much has happened since then on the show. You have to continue! Oh my goodness . . . Carson, Radek, and Elizabeth in the same bed at once. :D

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed. Thank you kindly :)
Chapter 3: 3: Fantasie
Hide and Seek by Haggy [NC-17]
[Reviews - 81]

Summary: John and Rodney are stranded, and things start changing between them...

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 20 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 52189; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Oct 2006; Published: 07 Apr 2006
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
08 Apr 2006
More . . . soon . . . NOW!!!! Give me more NOW or heads will roll. ********** I love the first person POV. The technobable at the beginning of the story really added to its credibility and its overall appeal. Great job all around!!!

Author's Response: thankies:)
Chapter 9: Chapter Nine
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Summary:

Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 31 Dec 1969; Published: 31 Dec 1969
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
18 Apr 2006
OMG! Freak'n out! This is such an awsome story!!!! NEED MORE! --- So how much is Wal-Mart paying you? hehehe You should totally make up an entire commercial for foot fungal creme or something in the middle of the next chapter.

Author's Response: Alas, I'm making no money...(actually, I'm worried of someone from Wal-Mart reading this and going, "HEY! SUE!") As for the 'whole' commercial...well, I'll see what I can do, lol. And thank you!
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
21 Apr 2006
That commercial was so freakn' funny! MORE! I liked the chapter, but nothing is happening. When will we see some answers? What is her mission? I won't comment on your taste in sports. I also won't comment on how updating your story has bumped my updated story to the bottom of the page. Of course, you could make up for these offenses by reading my fic. :D PS Starbuck is hotter than Sheppard!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks. And I know most y'all don't care about my sport tastes (I told you I didn't know why I was telling you, lol) and as for nothing happening, everything I write (check that. Everything I write that makes it into the finished story) has a purpose. Just wait an' see. :)
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