11 Oct 2005
"He didn't think he'd ever forget the sound of that gunshot as it echoed through the forest, startling birds from their roosts and causing John to crash to his knees in horror, his stomach clenching and threatening to double him over. He didn't know how long he knelt like that; trying to catch his breath and imagining the way Rodney's brains would be decorating the forest floor."
Special thanks go to Becca, for without her this wouldn't have ever been finished!
Extra betas by lillyjk, saffronra and jeanstarwind. Thank you girlies :)
Updated: 03 Mar 2006; Published: 03 Mar 2006
I am usually very iffy about stories that involve torture. I find that most writers have difficulty turely capturing it in a light that doesn't make it either way to graphic or the characters end up being far to out of character. But this story was amazing. You had me sitting on my seat waiting to hear what came next. You had my heart in my throat. My stomache would twist and turn in parts. There were part that I found difficult to read but with the shear brilliance of the way this story was written I keep reading. The characters felt so true to life(or fiction as the case maybe).
The one part that made love this story is that I found myself saying things out loud.
ex. "Lorne’s bringing him in now, they’ve got to get him to the jumper, then he’ll be home John. He’ll be home,” was just a brilliant line and as I read it I just sat back and my chair and I swear to god with a hand on my chest let out a sigh and repeated "He'll be home"
thank you so very much.
Author's Response: Oh my, I am pleased it affected you so much. It makes the process of writing seem so much more worthwhile if people really enjoy reading it :)
John is a Slave who ends up the property of one Dr Rodney Mckay
Warnings: Non Con, abuse, rape, bondage and all sorts of possible other things. Some good, some not so good.
Acknowledgments: Thanks to Laura for the beta. Any mistakes left are mine.
Updated: 19 Apr 2007; Published: 13 Dec 2006
I loved this story. I really hope that you get a chance to write more. I started it and couldn't stop reading till the end. Sheer brilliance.
John likes Rodney but is going out with Elizabeth. High School AU.
Updated: 29 May 2007; Published: 29 May 2007
Why do I have such a weakness for Highschool AU's???? This made me cry and little. I loved it.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1
Why do I have such a weakness for Highschool AU's???? This made me cry a little. I loved it.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! (and hee, I have a weakness for High School AUs as well. *pets them*)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1
The bar-hopping thing isn't Rodney's "scene", but a random encounter with a stranger still sounds pretty good.
Updated: 14 Jul 2007; Published: 14 Jul 2007
I really try not to ask for sequals because I think the author has a reason for living it where they did. but i am gonna break my own rule and maybe just say how amazing it would be if there was a follow up to this, cause it was really really good.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks for the compliment. I\'ve gotten a lot of requests for a sequel to this one, so I\'m thinking about it. :)
Chapter 1: Where We've Been Before