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Penname: Temaris [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 13 Oct 2005
Membership status: Administrator
I'm one of the archivists of Wraithbait, and sometimes I even write fanfic... sometimes :)

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Reviews by Temaris

Summary: When Rodney is being culled, John suddenly has to deal with the loss of his best friend. As for Rodney, things get downhill from there. Set somewhere after The Hive, spoilers up to that episode.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Pre-slash, Romance, Series
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 17 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 67906; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Jun 2006; Published: 29 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
17 Feb 2006
I'm enjoying this series so much (though I am wondering how exactly you're going to fix it!), and I figured after twitching anxiously all through Monday (and getting the update on Tuesday) I should let you know how much you've improved my Mondays! Thank you!

Author's Response: thank you very much, i'll try to make your week next, uh, week.
Chapter 9: Day Eighty-Nine

Summary: McKay is eager to study new technology that offers a chance of preserving memories of the culled, but Atlantis's new trading partners want something in return.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 20 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 52015; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Jun 2006; Published: 30 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
06 Apr 2006
Very intriguing -- I do hope they can save Rodney, and the tension is just killing me here. I'm looking forward to seeng what Teyla meant.

Author's Response: I'm glad I could keep it suspenseful - - and you'll find out what Teyla meant soon enough.
Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen
Routines by lavvyan [G]
[Reviews - 44]

Summary: Atlantis may adore John, but her subroutines love Rodney.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1846; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Jun 2006; Published: 19 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
30 May 2006
I don't think I said how much I loved this story, and its unique point of view, and complexity of the systems running Atlantis (because it couldn't all be one AI!). Love this :-)

Author's Response: thank you! i kind of got that when you offered your missing scene. :)
Chapter 1: Routines

Summary: John Sheppard is determined to bring to ruin the villainous McKay family. But young (ok, youngish) Rodney interferes with his plans. Okay, so this is what comes of reading the Harlequin SGA website which triggers memories of reading a thousand Regency/Historical novels as an impressionable youngster (**eek**, no wonder I'm twisted). The result is this complete and utter cliche **heh**. I make no guarantees as to the accuracy of any of the historical/british terms and settings depicted in this story. They are from my fuzzy memory of romance novels. Nuff said.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 18 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 60366; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Jun 2006; Published: 02 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
12 Aug 2007
I just adore this section of the story -- the test of trust and faith, and they win through! and yes, it's melodramatic, but it just makes me smile and want to cry with happiness all at once. Actually, I love that whole story, and I'm terrible at leaving feedback, but ... yes. Thank you :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! This isn\'t terrible feedback, this is awesome feedback! I\'m really glad you enjoyed it, melodrama and all :)
Chapter 15: 15 - Truths
Discretion by thegrrrl [NC-17]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: Pairings: Weir/Dex, Sheppard/McKay. Good food under the stars on a quiet, warm night, quiet voices murmuring all around them--it had the feel of a typical dinner party; one of many Elizabeth had attended back on Earth...sort of.

Categories: Bitextual
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4992; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Feb 2006; Published: 17 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
17 Feb 2006
I like this very much. The voices are spot on, and the quiet afection of all the relationships is a delight. I particularly liked the line about Ronon being ridiculously young, and Elizabeth happy to be a 'dirty old woman'. (And stoned Sheppard with Rodney was very cute *g*). Lovely stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Writing from Elizabeth's POV was a bit of a challenge, but I just couldn't resist the pairing. *g*
Chapter 1: Discretion
Phobia by Ismene [R]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: "So when were you going to tell me about this phobia of yours?"

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Drama, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes, Non-consensual
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1700; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Aug 2006; Published: 16 Aug 2006
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
05 Jun 2009
Oh, *ouch*. This is really deftly done --- just enough information to make it horribly plain. Poor Rodney -- poor Jeannie, for that matter :( I really liked the rock steadiness of John's presence.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Halloween challenge. It's Rodney's turn to tell a scary story.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Friendship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2431; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Oct 2006; Published: 25 Oct 2006
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
26 Oct 2006
This made me laugh so hard. Very nicely done, and oh, very funny! They won't ask him again any time soon *g*

Author's Response: Actually, you know they probably would, thinking lightning wouldn't strike twice. The trouble that man can find is endless! Glad you enjoyed it! ;D
Chapter 1: One

Summary: If he kept moving, even the tiny little bit that the Wraith cocoon allowed, he could convince himself he was still alive.

Categories: General
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1496; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Mar 2007; Published: 04 Mar 2007
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
05 Mar 2007
*shiver* Poor Rodney! Beautifully done.

Author's Response: Thanks! Poor Rodney, indeed.
Chapter 1: 1/1
Not Resistible by Reflex [PG-13]
[Reviews - 19]

Summary: After Lucius's removal from Atlantis everyone breathed in a sigh of relief. But Lucius did more damage then they were aware of and now one person is left to pick up the pieces in silence. McKay centric but includes everyone. Spoilers for Irrisistible and Sateda

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Episode Related
Warnings: Non-consensual
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5067; Completed: Yes
Updated: 09 Jan 2008; Published: 09 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
09 Jan 2008
Oh, ow. It's the one truly obvious issue with this episode that I've not seen anyone tackle seriously before. Nicely done, too (though I noticed a 'tantamount' where I think you meanb 'paramount' *g* but that's hardly important against the rest of the story, which I really -- is enjoyed the word? I'd love to see more of how Rodney copes, and how John deals if/when he finds out.

Author's Response: lol, I\'ll look into the \'tantamount\' thing. I\'m glad the story was -- appreciated ;) I\'ve said ot to others, but I\'m not sure I\'ll continue this fic. I\'m definately keeping a continuation in mind, but if it does happen it won\'t be for a while. THanks for letting me know that the story worked!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: Looking at his hands, Rodney thought how inconvenient this was going to be. (Post-Trio story)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama, Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1748; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Apr 2008; Published: 05 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Temaris (Signed)
07 Apr 2008
this was very sweet -- of course John lent him a hand. And the image of the two of them falling asleep together on the couch is too dear for words :-)

Author's Response: Hey, it\'s rare that I write something that could be considered sweet, so yay for it working out. ;) Mucho thanks for reading. :)
Chapter 1: By Other Hands