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Penname: Lorellipsis [Contact]
Real name: Lorelle Member Since: 20 Nov 2005
Membership status: Member
Yeah, I know... There's nothing here.
So far I'm doing heaps of Beta reading, but I hope to start writing my own stories soon.
Be patient... Be very, very patient.
Reviews by Lorellipsis
Happiness by girlgonemadd [NC-17]
[Reviews - 17]

Summary: Happiness can feel like heaven.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 9 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3784; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Sep 2005; Published: 16 Mar 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
06 Dec 2005
Gorgeous story. I like the way it returned to where the story opened, and the shower scene was really touching.

Author's Response: I can't thank you and everyone else enough for taking time to offer feedback. Thanks!
Chapter 9: Home
A Short Tale by Claire [PG-13]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: "Merchants and traders usually travel with two bodyguards and a body servant. And since they tagged Ford and Teyla as warriors..."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 876; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Jun 2005; Published: 05 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
09 Jan 2006
Okay... So you write light-hearted stories as well. I could have done without the Kavanagh visualization, though. Ugh *shudder*. "...and dress me in a pair of leather shorts so small they wouldn't have fitted one of Carson's mice!" Ah, now there's a better picture to help clear the revulsion of the previous one. And I'm off again to see what else you've got...

Author's Response: lol! But I thought Kavanagh in leather shorts was a picture everyone wanted...
Chapter 1: One of One
Green by Claire [G]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: John Sheppard has always been partial to green.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drabble, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 333; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jul 2005; Published: 02 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
09 Jan 2006
So, is there anything you can't write? I thought about this comment and I said to myself, "Oh, actually, there hasn't been any Action, yet." And then I thought, "Ah, no... That's not right. There seems to be plenty of 'Action' stories on the list." ;))

Author's Response: lol! Thanks :D
Chapter 1: One of One

Summary: "You have to have sex or Atlantis will explode..."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 364; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Aug 2005; Published: 06 Aug 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
09 Jan 2006
I have to agree with Alex - very cute!

Author's Response: *g* Thanks :D
Chapter 1: One
Chiaroscuro by micehell [PG-13]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: He hadn't been able to see much, understand much, in the crazy play of light and shadow in the alley.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2172; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Oct 2005; Published: 07 Oct 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
16 Dec 2005
Breathtaking... That's all I've time for. On to the next chapter, now.

Author's Response: Why thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Chapter 1: Chiaroscuro
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
16 Dec 2005
Pitter patter... I was going to say that was the sound of my heart, but on second thought, it's more like ba-BUMP, ba-BUMP, ba-BUMP...BUMP...b'bmp b'bmp b'bmp. Enough of my rubbish. Great fic. Loved Sheppard's vulnerability and McKay's confidence. Kind of a turn-around, but it works.

Author's Response: For all that John's physically brave on the show, I don't think of him as emotionally brave. He says very little about himself, and except for the whole Chaya fiasco, seems to put duty first. For me, Rodney seems more likely to say exactly what it is he wants, and then try to steamroller his way past any objections. ;) I'm happy you liked the story, though, regardless of the take on the characters. :)
Chapter 2: Pushing

Summary: "Well, yes General, but what about your clone?"

Categories: Crossovers > General
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Action/Adventure, Episode Related, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4739; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Nov 2005; Published: 03 Nov 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
01 Dec 2005
Great idea. This story has so much potential!

Author's Response: thanks! more coming soon!
Chapter 1: Invitation to the Clone
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
01 Dec 2005
This really captures O'Neill's character and then adds just enough of the teenage element.

Author's Response: thanks! i always felt kack was a bit of a brat. now he is free to show it.
Chapter 2: 2 .Mission Planning, Geek Caring and Bartering 101
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
01 Dec 2005
You have an evil mind, don't you? Maybe you should also say, "Be amused. Be very, very amused." because I have have a feeling that's what's coming.

Author's Response: actually, there are some dark emotional scenes and a bit of violence ahead...
Chapter 3: 3. The New Cutters – erm – Recruits
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
01 Dec 2005
This makes me want to go back and watch the beginning again. Except, this time I'll see mini-Jack there with them.

Author's Response: they screwed up a lot, didn't they?
Chapter 4: Departure Day
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
01 Dec 2005
This is really well written! McKay is perfect.

Author's Response: thyanks. i just hope i can keep his snarky self in character
Chapter 5: 5. Knowledge, Technology and Myth-Understandings
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
01 Dec 2005
Really good! I thought it was going to be more of a comedy, but it's great (just the way it is). Love the ending - with the presents from the team, the photo, and the whole emotional thing too. Reminds you that mini-Jack is/was big-Jack and has the feelings and depth of an adult, despite his young appearance. Well done.

Author's Response: thanks!
Chapter 6: Rocks from Home
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
01 Dec 2005
This is really well written! McKay is perfect.

Author's Response: really? thanks!
Chapter 5: 5. Knowledge, Technology and Myth-Understandings

Summary: Carson's return to his home on Earth.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett
Genres: Angst, Character Study
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5811; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Dec 2005; Published: 06 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
06 Dec 2005
Nice! Carson seems so lost. It'll be good to see where you go with this. (and give Carson a big hug from me)

Author's Response: will do :)
Chapter 1: 1
[Reviews - 2]

Summary: When McKay and Sheppard find themselves in another tricky situation, they soon find something else.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4381; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Dec 2005; Published: 10 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
10 Dec 2005
Loved it! They're all so in character I can just SEE them. Your story is funny and sweet - in just the right ways.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hope to chat with you soon!
Chapter 1: one and only

Summary: Command is a lonely position to be in, especially if you are 16 year old clone in another Galaxy.

Categories: General
Characters: Other
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Action/Adventure, Character Study, Friendship, Humour, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7536; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Jan 2006; Published: 11 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
11 Dec 2005
I like the way Daniel still has the connection he had with Jack Sr. It will be cool to see where you go with this :-)

Author's Response: well, you'll be the first to know, won't you? :-P
Chapter 1: Prologue: Wherever You Go…
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Summary:

Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 31 Dec 1969; Published: 31 Dec 1969
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Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
10 Mar 2006
Loved your story. I could just picture Ronon as I was reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you.
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Summary: Inspired by Teaphile's wonderful 'On A Clear Day (You Can See Frustration)' written for the sga_flashfic Harlequin challenge on livejournal. Ronon gets his hands on a Harlequin novel and Rodney in his sights. It doesn't go well.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Ronon Dex
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time, Humour, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 12522; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Feb 2006; Published: 11 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
10 Mar 2006
Great story! So well written and the characters were just perfect. And FUNNY! I actually laughed out-loud a few times - pretty rare for me. Thanks. I enjoyed it immensely.
Chapter 1: 1

Summary: Carson, Rodney and Lorne learn more about Atlantis and about themselves

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Original Character, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Character Study
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2889; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Mar 2006; Published: 14 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Lorellipsis (Signed)
16 Mar 2006
That was interesting. Liked the thing about the little blue squares.
Chapter 1: 1/1