Wraithbait

Summary: Happiness can feel like heaven.

Gorgeous story. I like the way it returned to where the story opened, and the shower scene was really touching.

Author's Response: I can't thank you and everyone else enough for taking time to offer feedback. Thanks!

Summary: "Merchants and traders usually travel with two bodyguards and a body servant. And since they tagged Ford and Teyla as warriors..."

Okay... So you write light-hearted stories as well. I could have done without the Kavanagh visualization, though. Ugh *shudder*. "...and dress me in a pair of leather shorts so small they wouldn't have fitted one of Carson's mice!" Ah, now there's a better picture to help clear the revulsion of the previous one. And I'm off again to see what else you've got...

Author's Response: lol! But I thought Kavanagh in leather shorts was a picture everyone wanted...

Summary: John Sheppard has always been partial to green.

So, is there anything you can't write? I thought about this comment and I said to myself, "Oh, actually, there hasn't been any Action, yet." And then I thought, "Ah, no... That's not right. There seems to be plenty of 'Action' stories on the list." ;))

Author's Response: lol! Thanks :D

Summary: "You have to have sex or Atlantis will explode..."

I have to agree with Alex - very cute!

Author's Response: *g* Thanks :D

Summary: He hadn't been able to see much, understand much, in the crazy play of light and shadow in the alley.

Breathtaking... That's all I've time for. On to the next chapter, now.

Author's Response: Why thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Pitter patter... I was going to say that was the sound of my heart, but on second thought, it's more like ba-BUMP, ba-BUMP, ba-BUMP...BUMP...b'bmp b'bmp b'bmp. Enough of my rubbish. Great fic. Loved Sheppard's vulnerability and McKay's confidence. Kind of a turn-around, but it works.

Author's Response: For all that John's physically brave on the show, I don't think of him as emotionally brave. He says very little about himself, and except for the whole Chaya fiasco, seems to put duty first. For me, Rodney seems more likely to say exactly what it is he wants, and then try to steamroller his way past any objections. ;) I'm happy you liked the story, though, regardless of the take on the characters. :)

Summary: "Well, yes General, but what about your clone?"

Great idea. This story has so much potential!

Author's Response: thanks! more coming soon!

This really captures O'Neill's character and then adds just enough of the teenage element.

Author's Response: thanks! i always felt kack was a bit of a brat. now he is free to show it.

You have an evil mind, don't you? Maybe you should also say, "Be amused. Be very, very amused." because I have have a feeling that's what's coming.

Author's Response: actually, there are some dark emotional scenes and a bit of violence ahead...

This makes me want to go back and watch the beginning again. Except, this time I'll see mini-Jack there with them.

Author's Response: they screwed up a lot, didn't they?

This is really well written! McKay is perfect.

Author's Response: thyanks. i just hope i can keep his snarky self in character

Really good! I thought it was going to be more of a comedy, but it's great (just the way it is). Love the ending - with the presents from the team, the photo, and the whole emotional thing too. Reminds you that mini-Jack is/was big-Jack and has the feelings and depth of an adult, despite his young appearance. Well done.

Author's Response: thanks!

This is really well written! McKay is perfect.

Author's Response: really? thanks!

Summary: Carson's return to his home on Earth.

Nice! Carson seems so lost. It'll be good to see where you go with this. (and give Carson a big hug from me)

Author's Response: will do :)

Summary: When McKay and Sheppard find themselves in another tricky situation, they soon find something else.

Loved it! They're all so in character I can just SEE them. Your story is funny and sweet - in just the right ways.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hope to chat with you soon!

Summary: Command is a lonely position to be in, especially if you are 16 year old clone in another Galaxy.

I like the way Daniel still has the connection he had with Jack Sr. It will be cool to see where you go with this :-)

Author's Response: well, you'll be the first to know, won't you? :-P

Summary:

Loved your story. I could just picture Ronon as I was reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you.

Summary: Inspired by Teaphile's wonderful 'On A Clear Day (You Can See Frustration)' written for the sga_flashfic Harlequin challenge on livejournal. Ronon gets his hands on a Harlequin novel and Rodney in his sights. It doesn't go well.

Great story! So well written and the characters were just perfect. And FUNNY! I actually laughed out-loud a few times - pretty rare for me. Thanks. I enjoyed it immensely.

Summary: Carson, Rodney and Lorne learn more about Atlantis and about themselves

That was interesting. Liked the thing about the little blue squares.