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Penname: bonita7 [Contact]
Real name: Bonnie Member Since: 08 Dec 2005
Membership status: Member

Reviews by bonita7

Summary: Sometimes it's hard to tell the difference between sunset and the sunrise.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4508; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jan 2006; Published: 02 Jan 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
02 Jan 2007
Like Laura I just about had it figured out only I thought it was what Rodney saw when the Asurans invaded his mind. Very nice that you were able to keep the illusion going for not only Rodney but for your readers.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Rodney knows all about denial. I wanted to write mindless porn but instead I ended up with a little character piece. John POV and woobie!Rodney.---Rodney glared at him, "Certainly not! The McKay children didn't waste time on frivolous pursuits."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2967; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 May 2006; Published: 21 Feb 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
04 May 2006
Perfect lead-in to the exerpt from Letters from Pegasus. Very nice. I almost hope that you are able to write another chapter regarding if Jeannie and Rodney ever do get together but it stands very well by itself without any further ornamentation.
Chapter 2: The Expression of Genetic Potential
Fix Me by anyanka [NC-17]
[Reviews - 27]

Summary: Sleep deprivation is a terrible thing. Rating for next chapeter

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9785; Completed: Yes
Updated: 27 Mar 2006; Published: 25 Feb 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
27 Mar 2006
Enjoyed the story-especially how the POV's would change in each chapter. Personally, the epilogue is the best! Elizabeth will not be able to say 'rubbing' with a straight face or without a blush. Then the great morale booster of new furniture and who from the SGC has to deal with the Ikea order? ::snort:: Thanks for the story

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I kind of like the idea of Gen. Landrey flicking through the Ikea catalogue trying to pick out soft furnishing for Atlantis :-)
Chapter 3: Epilogue

Summary: When Lorne arrived with Ronon, they'd busted in the room, and found Rodney's lifeless corpse beside me. If they'd taken just one more day to find us, I wouldn't be stuck living this pain every single day. One day longer. Then again, if they'd been a day earlier, I would't be living this pain, either. Better to think the former, because the latter only made me murderous.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe, Character Study, Drama, Friendship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 17962; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Mar 2006; Published: 26 Mar 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
26 Mar 2006
Pass that box of tissues this way...Very powerful. John is so broken as is Ronon and so many of Atlantis. I am wondering until the last moments if John was going to do something 'stupid'or not. Even at the end, the hint remains there. And wondering if John and Ronon ever do heal from the pain. Rodney's ghost was just so...him. Thanks do much for writing it and your friends for being so stubborn about amaking you complete it. Bravo

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Shelly made me write this, and like the other painful fic she made me write, it turned out to be something I'm very proud of.
Chapter 1: One

Summary: Chap. 2 is now up! Alien crack made them (and me) do it.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5625; Completed: No
Updated: 01 May 2006; Published: 26 Mar 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
27 Mar 2006
Okay, now I have to clean the coffee off the monitor screen - thanks! Really, that was one of the more humorous pieces I've read in a while. Narcotic mud...a spa mudbath would have a whole new meaning and be in much greater demand.
Chapter 1: Planet Mud
Hide and Seek by Haggy [NC-17]
[Reviews - 81]

Summary: John and Rodney are stranded, and things start changing between them...

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 20 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 52189; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Oct 2006; Published: 07 Apr 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
28 Jun 2006
Ahhh, Rodney, with all that genius and knowing that Sheppard is the self-sacrificing kind, you don't see right through this charade. Well where the heart is involved, the brain only occassionally is. Excellent twist. It'll be interesting to see what you have planned. Thanks for writing this variant of 'aliens made us have sex' - the planet made us have sex. *grin*
Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

Summary: John gave Carson a bright smile and a sharp, "Hi!" Rodney rolled his eyes. "You certainly are," he deadpanned.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2285; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Apr 2006; Published: 25 Apr 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
26 Apr 2006
"I Got Plotzed on Pegasus Pot" I see the t-shirt! Very giggle-worthy.

Author's Response: OMG, that would be too funny. Complete with pictures of little wasted fish. :) Glad to have amused.
Chapter 1: complete
Shadow by Gwendolen [PG-13]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: He'd always expected to be the first one to go. - Companion piece to my story 'Ghost'.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Drama, Established Relationship
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 810; Completed: No
Updated: 08 May 2006; Published: 08 May 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
08 May 2006
"...he knows that there are people who depend on him, who need him." That is the only thing keeping John on this side of the veil. That and Rodney would kick his butt if John did something stupid. Very powerful. You did a good job capturing John being torn apart by grief, loneliness, and duty. Also, the anguish of the others who can only look on and suffer in silence knowing that they are going to lose another valued friend very soon. Thank you.
Chapter 1: Those We leave behind - John

Summary: Frazier and Ali have got nothin' on the crew of Atlantis. Minor Sheppard and McKay slash, but Teyla, Ronon, Carson and Weir all get their shot.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Established Relationship, Friendship, Humour, Hurt Comfort, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8240; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 May 2006; Published: 13 May 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
15 May 2006
**“I haven’t agreed,” Ronon replied. “You will,” Teyla advised with a knowingly raised eyebrow.** Oh, so perfectly Teyla! And Rodney's comment - “You were out of contact and missed your check in because Ronon wouldn’t do a soft shoe and a little singing for the main guy’s wife?” That is down-right kind for Rodney. Anyway, seeing Rodney try to be his "normal" snarky self while being sick and oh...so cuddly, it was cute and adorable. (yeah, yeah, I can almost hear the commentary Rodney would make about being cute.) Very good. Thanks for the tale.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1

Summary: "If he were able he'd have told her the real story, infinitely more telling of Rodney's character than the fabrication, if a little less brave."

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Character Study
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1503; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 May 2006; Published: 13 May 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
15 May 2006
About halfway through John's POV, all I could think of was Frank Capra's 'It's A Wonderful Life' and how one person can make an impact on so many others. I can think of a few other POV you could have included but the tale perfect just as it is. Well done.

Author's Response: I was trying to show that impace, so I'm glad it comes across well. Thanks
Chapter 1: 1 of 1

Summary: "Rodney's turned into a telepathic cat."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8639; Completed: No
Updated: 17 Aug 2006; Published: 27 May 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
27 May 2006
**OMG** That is hilarious! The possibilities are almost endless. I can't wait to see where you go with this - besides with humanRodney and John in bed...so *innocently* where's Rodney going to sleep?
Chapter 1: part 1

Summary: A mental component, Rodney told him once. You control it with your mind.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2219; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 May 2006; Published: 31 May 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
31 May 2006
That was...disturbing. Rodney sounded so unlike himself and then the talk of the strings... You make me wonder what else has happened and to who. Creepy is definitely a good word to describe this. Hopefully that was what you intended since you did a good job.

Author's Response: Oh yes, it was supposed to be creepy, so I'm glad I managed it. Thanks! I'm particularly happy that you mentioned the line about the strings - - I really liked that one.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Did you ever ask yourself - who will greet your soul on the other side?

Categories: General
Characters: Original Character
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 438; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jun 2006; Published: 02 Jun 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
02 Jun 2006
“I am God. I can be as weird as I want!” That is the best set of lines. "God" won't be defined by any human, Wraith or other creature and it's "us" who are providing the definition. Wonderfully complex and insightful. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you. I always thought that every religion somehow limits God. And if we would assume that God is the sum of self-conscious energy fields of the Multiverse (and humans or Wraith represent only the miniscule portion of those fields) God can truly be what he wants.
Chapter 1: 1

Summary: It wasn't normal, he knew that. It wasn't normal to be in love with your best friend, wasn't normal to feel this way even after his death.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1419; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Jun 2006; Published: 16 Jun 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
16 Jun 2006
Okay, first impression...wow! And no one seemed to notice until weeks too late. No one realized how deep Rodney's feelings were. But Rodney knew something wasn't right. Those words repeated throughout the story just made the others not noticing more poignant. Very good. As for the lack of a beta, the only thing I caught was "The way he never let Sheppard’s dog tags out of his site." Site is a place. Sight is one of the five senses. I think you meant the later.
Chapter 1: Fall Away
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: Crossover between Stargate Atlantis (S2) and Earth Final Conflict (S1).Tempus Fugit.

Categories: Crossovers > General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Hurt Comfort, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 15617; Completed: No
Updated: 04 Aug 2006; Published: 17 Jun 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
11 Jul 2006
More, please...?
Chapter 5: 5

Summary: Rodney tries to repair his friendship with John. Things do not go as planned.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, First Time, Humour, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3951; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Jul 2006; Published: 11 Jul 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
11 Jul 2006
It would be amusing if Fluffy were Sheppard but kind of... predictable unless you come up with an interesting twist. But I like the way your mind is thinking. I think it may be even more amusing if Fluffy was a bystander and was trying to figure out who Rock was and his friend. Either way, PLEASE keep writing. I need to see what you dastardly, but cunning plan is....

Author's Response: I hope it worked for you. The original film was a romantic comedy from the early 1940's, or maybe the 1930s. The feeling of the original, and its genre, definately influenced the direction of my story.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: AU for the Fourth Horsemen. Something went wrong, and SGA-1 come to find out what happened.

Categories: Crossovers > General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Angst, Challenge, Episode Related, Hurt Comfort, Team
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1835; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Jul 2006; Published: 16 Jul 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
17 Jul 2006
so sad...yet there are so many questions. Who actually survived much less how would Atlantis deal with the fact that their homeworld is - for lack of a better description - dead. Easily able to stand alone and begging for a sequel. Thanks for writing it.
Chapter 1: 1.

Summary: "Turns out it had been a bad week ever since he stepped through that damn Stargate, ever since he arrived in the Pegasus galaxy.." Set after Conversion, so spoilers until that.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2707; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Jul 2006; Published: 19 Jul 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
19 Jul 2006
I'm going to echo the others - this definitely deserves a sequel. And I am also going to add my voice to the "do not have Rodney break up with Katie" squad. I've read some very good Sheppard/Beckett and Sheppard/Zelenka stories out there and this could be the beginning of another. Hopefully your muse or a plot-bunny bites and we get another installment *grin* Very good voices. Nice tension.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting :) I think if there is going to be a sequel it won't be a "make everything" better installment. But an exploration of the aftermath. And ok, maybe I like the idea of Sheppard/Beckett so we'll see!
Chapter 1: 1/1
We Honour by FallenPride [PG-13]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: "Just as the count down reached zero, she closed her eyes." Warnings: Spoilers! [all seasons]. Angst, Apoca, Dark, Character Death(s), Extreme violence, Mentions of het & slash (non-graphic), Mention of Mprg, Kid!.

Categories: Bitextual
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes, Character death, May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4431; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Aug 2006; Published: 14 Aug 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
14 Aug 2006
It's like flashes of their lives. There are so many stories that could be told in this AU. I want to read them but also don't need to since I know what is going to happen. Very well done. Thanks for the insight.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I am really glad you liked this. I was worried it wouldn't get much attention because of the CD. So thank you for reading!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I am really glad you liked this. I was worried it wouldn't get much attention because of the CD. So thank you for reading!
Chapter 1: We Honour - 1/1

Summary: The SGA team returns to Earth for rest and relaxation. A funeral leads to an invitation to spend time with the SG-1 team at General Landry's house. All in John's POV, much angst and soul searching about his life ensues, with some humor and McShep mixed in.

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humour, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash, Team
Warnings: Adult themes, Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 13670; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Aug 2006; Published: 23 Aug 2006
Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
24 Aug 2006
Love the last paragraph! Having this story be solely from John's point of view was the right thing to do. This way characters could move around without you having to come with actions, much less any dialogue. Of course, the grocery store visit by the aliens could have been hilarious.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I started out trying to do it from several points of view but it got too complicated so I just settled with John.
Chapter 1: Part 1 of 1