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Penname: SylvanWitch [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 17 Dec 2005
Membership status: Member
I'm just a girl who likes her fandoms. I started out with HP and moved to SGA because I find Sheppard compelling. I write original fic, too. That's all.
Reviews by SylvanWitch

Summary: When a diplomatic incident gives Ronon a new perspective on his relationship with John, he decides to seize the day.

Categories: Bitextual, Ship Pairings > Ronon Dex/Other, Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Richard Woolsey, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related, First Time, Team
Warnings: Non-consensual
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5654; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Jan 2010; Published: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: SylvanWitch (Signed)
14 Dec 2010
Oh, this is lovely! You have completely nailed Ronon's obstinance and loyalty, which can sometimes amount to the same thing, and his quiet but very keen acuity in observing people. Thanks so much for sharing this!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John Sheppard had served his country and just wanted to be left alone for the rest of his life. Too bad Rodney McKay had other ideas. So when John moves to Atlantis, at Rodney's behest, he discovers more than the City of the Ancients, he discovers Evan Lorne.

Part of the Atlantis Big Bang 2010

Updated: 14 Oct 2010; Published: 14 Oct 2010
Reviewer: SylvanWitch (Signed)
24 Feb 2012
Oh, this was simply fantastic! There is so much to admire about this story, but I think the thing I find most impressive is the slow unraveling of the mystery of John's damage, of who he was and how he came to be where he is now, and the equal pace of Evan's patient pursuit, the way the two are gradually revealed in inverse parabola, so that as John starts to let go of one thing, he starts to open to another. I also find the thoroughness of detail in John's emotional state to be both impressively accurate AND not overdone. There's a fine balance there, and you maintain it throughout. Finally, I just adore the way you've written every single character, but I especially enjoyed Ronon and Woolsey. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Chapter 1: As Deep Cries Out To Deep