Wraithbait

Summary: McKay is eager to study new technology that offers a chance of preserving memories of the culled, but Atlantis's new trading partners want something in return.

He only has feelings but not the actual events. So is this guy trying to dig himself into a early grave before he actual help them by quoting Rodney? Very poor taste. Loving this fic...a lot :D

Author's Response: Well, he has the feelings coupled with the sights and sounds - - like watching a movie where you feel what the characters are feeling. But yes, he doesn't understand all of it, not even close. Glad you're liking it!

Absolutely brilliant chapter!!!!! So many extreme emotions...sadness, surprise, anger and horror. The reactions from Sheppard and Ronon are very natural and concerned. I am now deeply disturbed for Rodney especially his condition at the end of this chapter...and that is even with Carson there :( This story is such a joy to read :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad everything Sheppard was feeling in this chapter came through so well.

Interesting twist. Hopefully it won't be as abd as what Zelenka is thinking. BUT it's always a problem when people mess with technology especially without thinking of the ramifications of their actions. Poor poor Rodney. *claps* this story just gets better and better :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll keep enjoying it as it goes on.

What to do now? Zelenka's theory has panned out and Sheppard is getting a taste of the experiences. What will he do with them? :D

Author's Response: Someone should give Zelenka a raise, for one thing - - oh, really? Check back with me a few days from now. Thanks!

Okay will Carson be able to manage Rodney...will any of them? At least they have a plan of action....:D

Author's Response: There is an upcoming scene between Carson and Rodney that will answer that question - - remember, Ronon and Teyla have yet to hear how McKay's doing.

It is nice to know that they are there for Rodney...his team and Carson. So many memories would be painful for both, to bear to listen and remember. Nicely written :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, this is a very painful situation for everyone, isn't it?

Redell certainly got a front row experience :D

Author's Response: He certainly did, didn't he?

Absolutely brilliant. I winced with them all when Rodney was going through the memories (his own and the drowning) and was sadden (along with the other characters) at the extent of this experience on them all. You have captured it so well. Cheers :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, the memories were awful, weren't they? And they're certainly affecting them all.

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Ah ha good tease. I thought you had killed him off with the warnings of "character death". You fooled me. Love the story.

Author's Response: Glad you like the story (it's my first piece of fanfiction)

Escape McKay. You will have to do this by youself as no one else can help you...they don't know your alive. Evil evil evil Koyla you won't know what hit you when Sheppard finds you. Great job...pleease update soon :D

Author's Response: I've got exams sue soon, so I'm not sure how much time I've got for writing, but I'll try to get the story updated.

Woohoo thanks for the quick update especially with exams pending. Hope they go well. What will become of Rodney? A slave to the Genii until he can't deliver what they want? Will the spy network let Atlantis know that Rodney's still alive?

Wow another quick update *grins* thanks so much. Yay he's back home. I'm eager to know what he did to the Genii before he left...hopefully Kolya doesn't get a hold of him again if he's done some real damage. Weir and Sheppard must be a bit pissed that their information network (they must have contacts on the planets) didn't inform them that the genii had a new scientist. Did the Genii not use their new technology in the past year? Anyway, nightmares????? Oh this won't be pretty. A really good way to understand what happened to him though. Keep up the absolutely fab job - your first fic? Kudos to you :D

Summary: Sheppard has that sinking feeling in the middle of a Wraith culling. Warnings for language and violence.

That doesn't sound very good. What's in the swamps?

Author's Response: Hi, angw! The Sodden Lands are kind of an open secret for the townspeople. Too bad they didn't think to mention the secret to the boys! More of an explanation will be in chapter 5. Thanks for the review! FSA

Summary: Sheppard doesn't see himself as he is; McKay isn't sure he can let it be. Women, fire, death and identity crisis cannot break a true friendship.

Whatever will happen next? :D

Author's Response: Ummmm, I dunno, maybe Halling will save the day? Or, better yet, the Care Bears will come and care them all to safety :)

Summary: Atlantis is always cold.

Hints of McKay/Sheppard/Weir

This was a good tag for the episode. i like how you wrote the interplay between Sheppard, Weir and McKay. :D

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Summary: I wrote this one as a challenge to myself because I'm beginning to think I can no longer write short fics. So my answer to that was to kill off a character. Not so sure what that says about my *own* character!

*sniff sniff* a really good short story :D

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An interesting tale. I liked the shape shifter and the dialogue between all the characters. Especially the "didn't want to trade with you because you were acting suspicious." :D

Summary: Rodney deals with survivors guilt. Tag for Grace Under Pressure.

Fantastic. This was so sad. A great insight into Rodney; his past and his thoughts. I like how you had the past come full circle with the events of GUP. :D

Summary: One day, he was going to wake up and not know who he was.

Wow. "One day, he was going to wake up and not know who he was." I had to wonder what that meant and after reading the chapter I am enlightened. This is a great peice of writing. Rodney drugged out of his mind. Sheppard watching it all and attempting to bring some sanity to Rodney's thoughts. The tragedy of the situation - someone has died yet again and it's weighing heavily on Rodney's mind. I am pleased to see that this story is not yet complete and look forward to the continuation of this superb story. Will he find himself? :D

Author's Response: I'm glad the summary worked - - it took me a long time to decide what to use. Unfortunately, this is a one-shot (I have it correctly labeled now), but I'm sure I'll address the same theme somewhere else in the future. Thank you for this lovely feedback.

Summary: A series that focuses on team bonding set during Season One, looking at how everyone met, and how they went from strangers to a team to friends.

Oh this was superb. Spot on with the banter between Sheppard and Rodney oh and the snark :D

Author's Response: Thank you :) Snark for snark I always say... well, no I don't, but you know what I mean...