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Penname: Cpt Untouchable [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 18 Jan 2006
Membership status: Member
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Infinity by Wintertime [PG-13]
[Reviews - 52]

Summary: Sometimes technology demands more than just a gene. (Now with sequel.)

Categories: General
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3570; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Feb 2006; Published: 09 Sep 2005
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
13 Feb 2006
This is one of the most beautiful and horrifying things I've ever read. You make the term 'fanfiction' sound ridiculous. Asimov, eat your heart out.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. "Beautiful and horrifying" is one of my favorite compliments.
Chapter 2: Assembly
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Summary:

Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 31 Dec 1969; Published: 31 Dec 1969
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Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
29 Jun 2006
I can't even begin to tell you how much I would love to see this in an episode. Just ... fabulous. This is one I come back to again and again.
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Ten Days by Dianann [PG]
[Reviews - 11]

Summary: Rodney finds himself in an Atlantis that's been completely deserted.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe, Drama, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4173; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Jun 2007; Published: 09 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
22 Jan 2006
I love this, ever so much. How cool would this be as an episode?
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: When Rodney is being culled, John suddenly has to deal with the loss of his best friend. As for Rodney, things get downhill from there. Set somewhere after The Hive, spoilers up to that episode.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Pre-slash, Romance, Series
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 17 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 67906; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Jun 2006; Published: 29 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
26 Jan 2006
Aggh, no, no, no saying goodbye! This is a captivating story. What a nightmare, contemplating living the entirety of your remaining life stranded and alone. And John! Having to live with everything unsaid, and the thought of McKay dying alone and terrified... Awful. I was amused by the idea of the shield + Morse Code (it could work!), and the terrible names he was devising. Rodtopia. McKay so would go there. Is this finished, or are you writing as you go?

Author's Response: i love putting them through the wringer, i really do. *grins* the "how not to get back to atlantis" ideas weren't all mine, i just wanted to clarify why they wouldn't work. and no, this is not finished yet. i have a storyline, so i know where i'm going and when, but there are several more chapters i have to write. oh well.
Chapter 6: Day Seventeen
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
06 Feb 2006
This just ... hurts. (In a good way). As usual, looking forward to the next chapter, and hoping for some relief for our guys!

Author's Response: thank you, but i'm afraid relief is still not really within reach. but i'm getting to that, promise. :)
Chapter 8: Day Fifty-One

Summary: McKay is eager to study new technology that offers a chance of preserving memories of the culled, but Atlantis's new trading partners want something in return.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 20 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 52015; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Jun 2006; Published: 30 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
29 Jan 2006
I have a completely Pavlovian response to your updates. It's embarrassing how quickly I snap awake, virtual ears perked, gently drooling. So, I'm even more in love with Beckett now than I was. McKay's memories, unfiltered and observed by his friends, is weirdly powerful. He's exposed in a way he shouldn't be exposed, but it's to those with whom he's safest. Which is just ... cool, from a reader/writer standpoint. It's the classic fever/delirium revelation made deliciously poignant and original. I'm so impressed. And would also like to hug Carson's head, please. -Cpt. U (formerly AnonyMouse because, duh, failed to notice that someone else had the name)-

Author's Response: "Cpt. Untouchable" is a good name, though. Makes me think of Grodin again. I'm glad that you like the memory exposure, and you're absolutely right - - yes, it shouldn't be happening, but at least he's in good hands. And feel free to hug Carson - - I'm sure he needs it!
Chapter 9: Chapter Nine
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
09 Feb 2006
Ow. Speechless. I'd love to give intelligent feedback, but seriously ... speechless. This is raw.

Author's Response: Oh, this feedback is definitely good enough. Glad you liked it!
Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
24 Jun 2006
*breathes* I've loved this story from the beginning, and it's given me chills here at its end. How fabulously beautiful.

Author's Response: *blushes* That's very, very high praise! Thank you so much.
Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

Summary: To reach a stage in our existence where a new beginning is possible, we must live in moments of true present. To do that we must first accept our points of origin.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Pre-slash
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4838; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Feb 2006; Published: 23 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
27 Jan 2006
Wow. Ow. Can I smash Michael's nose? I didn't really need to feel more protective of McKay than I already did, before diving into your story, but, you know. It's fine. I'm sure therapy will help. ;) Looking forward to Beckett's entrance, and the next chapter.

Author's Response: yes you can, I'll even hold him down for you ;-) Slash IS my therapy, cheaper too... Thank you for commenting, glad you liked.
Chapter 3: Chapter 3. Michael
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
02 Feb 2006
This was so beautiful, from beginning to end. Brilliant character study, Kat.

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely feedback.
Chapter 6: Chapter 6. Moments of True Present

Summary: Written for Madelyn's Badfic Summary Mini-Ficathon to the prompt/summary written by delicate_sass:
While on an apparently uninhabited planet, Rodney is bit by a bug of unknown origins. No one thinks much of his panic...until they return to Atlantis, and Rodney becomes a set magnet! Hit on by everyone, can someone find a cure without giving in?

Categories: Slash Pairings > Multiple relationships
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Challenge
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 25; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Jan 2006; Published: 31 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
01 Feb 2006
Ahahaha... ow. I can't stop laughing over the reviews. Is that wrong?
Chapter 1: Everybody's Fool
Fragment by lillyjk [NC-17]
[Reviews - 11]

Summary: written for the coldestmonth challenge over on livejournal and um, I guess I went with the cold shoulder. angst ahead. in case it's not clear, the portions in italics are flashbacks. --- "I appreciate the effort but we both knew it was just a matter of time." He flexed his hands against the metal railing, hissing at the contact of hot metal against his skin. "Frankly I'm surprised it lasted this long."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1104; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Feb 2006; Published: 01 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
01 Feb 2006
Searing. This is so well done. Broke my heart! But well done. I'd like to thwack John now, please, and hug McKay's head.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. I was a little sad when I wrote it, so I think some of my own angst bled through.
Chapter 1: None

Summary: One day, he was going to wake up and not know who he was.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2015; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Feb 2006; Published: 03 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
03 Feb 2006
You continue to lay me out, speechless.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: "What the hell happened, and I'd better get an answer that doesn't involve that," he pointed at the bear who just blinked at him impassively, "Actually being Colonel Sheppard!"

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2941; Completed: Yes
Updated: 15 Feb 2006; Published: 15 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
15 Feb 2006
I said it back when this was first posted on LJ, but it bears (ha! bears!) repeating: I need a John Bear. No, seriously. Need. The image of him conked out, face down, too-big paws splayed around the bowl ... yeah. Need.
Chapter 1: n/a

Summary: It's pretty much what the title says.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 545; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Feb 2006; Published: 16 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
16 Feb 2006
MANSQUITO! Ahahahaha. These are awful. Just awful.

Author's Response: They are awful, but frighteningly not that much worse than some of the AUs that have been written in this fandom. /g/
Chapter 1: Five Lives John and Rodney Never Led

Summary: John roams through the base now, restless; seeking something that he'll recognise when he finds it.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Teyla Emmagan
Characters: John Sheppard, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1597; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Feb 2006; Published: 25 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Cpt Untouchable (Signed)
25 Feb 2006
Gah, this makes my chest hurt. That horrible moment as the film is paused, the guilty reactions of the people he cares about so much and would give his life to protect ... Damn.
Chapter 1: Seeking, Not Finding