Wraithbait

Summary: In the aftermath of Arcturus, Rodney deals with John's loss of trust. Then John has to deal with the loss of Rodney. *not a deathfic!!!*

oh my poor John! I could not stop crying and then i re-read it and stated up again. I loved how you described everyone's reactions and the aftermath what angst, loved it, so glad you updated and hope you continue to write. *best chapter ever*

Author's Response: I'm continuing to write, I promise. I hate it when writers just stop in the middle of a good story so I've sworn to myself to finish this. I can't leave John and Rodney twisting in the wind after all.

Summary: There really is something about a man in uniform.

oh wow! so hot that is a so hot John in his uniform taking Rodney up against the wall so many of my kinks here...:) sorry for the TMI either way great series

Summary: John and Rodney are stranded, and things start changing between them...

oh this chapter was brutal and I didn't see it coming, I'm crying over what John said to Rodney! It was so cruel, poor Rodney and John really does love him. this might take a while to fix but great story and please update soon. *heartbreaking*

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I owe a gret deal to mu awsome beta Leah who spiced up my take on John....

Summary: There was something about mixing the DNA of a wraith with the DNA of a human...

You write the best stories! A part of me just can't forgive John and Ronon yet as long as he earns back Rodney's trust then well...this story had kept me guessing b/c you could have gone darker in this chapter and I'm sure there is more to come, can't wait!

Summary: Every time the team leaves for another mission she expects them to return without him.

sadness and broken heart thats what you gave me. Also, I was surprised with who died do you mean it to be that way? Anyway, I thought for sure it was John who was gone but for some reason I always think its John who will go first that is why its more poignant when its not... he is the one left behind thank you for this story hope you will continue since its Elizabeth's POV I'd love to get the other's take care

Summary: I hear the question with every breath I take. The question they asked Rodney over and over as I lay dying before his eyes.

The ending line was just so powerful... Its fitting in the end that they are together. It reminds me of the ending of the movie, "Glory" where Matthew Broderick's character was thrown into the pit and he ends up next to one of his soldiers, which was Denzel Washington's character. You did her story justice. Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: Oh, wow. I haven't seen that movie since the sixth grade! Trust me, that was very long time ago. I'm glad you liked it.

Summary: Prompt # 8 from the sga22_slash LJ site

good suspense at the beginning of the story b/c I did not know who the man was on the planet and I was tempted to skip ahead and see who it was and then I read the blue eyes part and then rememberd the character death prompt and it made me feel bad for Rodney. Now, I love John and Rodney but Cameron and Rodney are my second favorite pairing but I love Rodney with just about everyone. He is just so lovable. The story was sad but filled with hope and promise so it wasn't too bad of a heartbreak. Thanks for sharing.

Summary: The flash of gold in his eyes was all it took for them to know it wasn't really him...

Thank you for writing an end. I wasn't expecting it b/c the first part stands alone just fine. Great, now I'm coflicted b/c in this fic, I feel bad for John and in your other one, I just want to hit him and see if he likes it. Great story.

Summary: In a different timeline/universe, Jack and Daniel are about to be married and Cameron meets Rodney for the first time, but Rodney is already involved with John and on the outside, everything is great. But what happens behind closed doors is a whole different story...

Wow, I really hate John. I became uncomfortable while reading the interaction and the extent of John's control...oh my very powerful images. I don't know if you are going to give reason or explaination on why John is like that or if he was all along and then started showing his true nature once he had Rodney, either way I'm along for the ride. Hope you continue. take care

Summary: He sees himself destroying Sheppard by taking McKay. (Kolya/McKay, Sheppard/McKay)

wicked POV from Kolya evil man great story

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: He kept running.

great instense story loved how Rodney understood what John was goin through and told him to stop running hope you finish your "lessons" series :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback and yes, lessons is still in the works. :)

Summary: Surviving the future.

oh I adore time travel time fics and adore yours, too! The ending was just so instense and sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Summary:

okay, I was all happy with the sexin and then you had to ruin it with the death :( wow, don't know if this was your intent but I felt so bad, so bad (not a stutter) for John poor Ronon, you killed him too :( take care

okay don't know what my problem is today but I keep clicking on the wrong things (argghh) don't worry I did read the warning so I knew about the death :) and its your choice, your story. sorry, didn't want you to think it was a flame. It was just sad b/c they were so happy and had just committed themselves to each other, intense and all. The heart oh, Rodney's heart in a box wow pretty morbid :) take care

Summary: Rodney needed to do this. That didnt mean he liked it.

*crys* you had me at this, " He stares into the Colonel’s tearful eyes." there is just something wrong with him having tearful eyes, it just show how much it hurt him b/c Sheppard is such clown and easy-going guy at times nice heart-wrenching story

Author's Response: yup, poor Sheppard was heartbroken, thanks for your lovely review

okay I just read my review and I find it disturbingly ironic that I described John as a clown when he doesn't like clowns (shudders) you know what I mean he hides his feelings so well sometimes... :)

Summary: McKay is turned into a 'birdman'

great set up for more, hope there is more. love a wing!fic update soon. please.

Author's Response: Chapter one posted. Thank you very much for your feedback :-)

Summary: When John was a child his father had always made him say the day he was going to do something. Character death mentioned, McShep friendship

oh how sad for John. you write great angst. Its packed in there in so few words. very dramatic.

Summary: Rodney's POV. Our heroes are enslaved on an alien world with forced amnesia.

adored this story. very hot sex scenes and it was so cool how we got to have double the sex, technically, it was different POV's but you can never have too much sexin McShep style. :) really liked how the POV's went back and forth, loved how they still had the attraction with memories or without. Great story, its going in my favorites. Thank you for sharing it. ta!

Author's Response: Thank you. It was a bit experimental so I'm glad it worked.