I can't wait for each chapter, this fic has me so hooked! I'm loving the triangle. But mostly, I think Elizabeth's slow-burn breakdown is the most engrossing. Rod & John have had there's fast and furious, but Liz isn't that kind of person which I think you've captured beautifully. I can't wait to see how or if the boys will react to or even notice her inevitable lost of control when they're so involved with each other and Atene. Speaking of Atene... fascinating! And I can totally feel for Liz...insecurity, distrust, lonliness. Absolutely awesome story... more please!
Author's Response: Elizabeth's erosion, her loneliness and conflicting feelings of loyalty, duty and fear for the future are what make this such a long story. The changes in her can't happen over night. It's great that you're enjoying that part and seeing how the different ways of coping (or not) result in different choices. John and Rodney break and patch themselves together, learning to live with the damage. Elizabeth holds herself together under more and more pressure, and we know what happens when the pressure gets too much for a person. But it isn't just her choices, it's the choices the men make the force her into decisions she wouldn't contemplate otherwise.
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