Penname: BLV [Contact] Real name: Audrey
Member Since: 18 Feb 2006 Membership status: Member
Well, how to start... My name is Audrey, I'm 22 years old. I'm a translator and currently student in webdesign.
I don't write stories (not enough imagination!!!) but I really enjoy translating into French the good stories I read in English.
It's beautifully written :-D Emotions and characters are very well portrayed.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that the emotions are being portrayed. I was a bit worried that the characters would come over a bit bland on that front. Thank you :)
That was great! I loved "Ronon quickly reassessed the situation". You wrote Ronon's thoughts perfectly... a kind of cold detachment ever present, even when he makes the discovery of the bite mark. Very well in character
Great little story. I liked the character study in it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I din't even realize there was character study in it till you mentioned that. I've fixed the genres to reflect that. thanks. Rosalie
Author's Response: Thanks. I was a bit worried about the end, it was so clear in my mind but I wasn't sure if it got across. Glad it worked; thanks so much for commenting.
Another great chapter! My favourite line: "it would never occur to Rodney to change his opinion of her just because they ended up snuggling in their sleep". This sums it all up. ;-)
