20 Feb 2006
Jack knew that stepping through the gate changed his life, but he didn't think one more time would make that much a difference; he was wrong. Now, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard and Rodney McKay are intertwined in an adventure of a lifetime, starting with how the hell to get back to being a grownup. (Sheppard/McKay/O'Neill) [Rating for later chapters when characters are of legal age.]
Updated: 15 Apr 2006; Published: 07 Mar 2006
Okay so I don't normally go for crossover fics! But I actually took a chance with this one and I'm happy to say I'm glad I did.
The interactions were all good and scarily enough I could see the three of them acting like this!
Good work and I look forward to reading more in the future:)
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story as it was fun writting. More on the way as soon as it comes back from the beta. :>)
Chapter 2: Tender Years part one
Oh it getting more interesting now! Its good to see them with still there same persnality but maybe a little of being ten seeps through now and then, thats good!:) I look forward to reading more in the future, keep up the good work!:)
Author's Response: Oh, yes, age has a LOT to do with how they'll be reacting to things, regardless of their mindset. :>) Glad you picked up on that. Thanks for the encouraging feedback and yes, I plan on keeping it going until the end. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it.
Chapter 3: Tender years part 2
Oh another great chapter, I like how they all found comfort together. And oh dear it seemed all of them were on the verge of crying, and i have to admit it was a sad chapter, i had the odd sniffle here and there at it. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading more in the future. Joulez
Author's Response: They needed each other, and that was the point. Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying the story and hope you will continue to do so. Again, thanks.
Chapter 6: Tender Years part 5
Oh another chapter, cool. I like the little bit of background info on John this time around, you do dish that out nicely over each chapter, kinda like unwrapping an early christmas present. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more on this in the furture. *wonders off muttering to self, about finishing her course work and not reading fanfictions.*
Author's Response: I hope the posting of another chapter won't put you too far behind your course work...think of it as a treat for doing your homework? I've got a few more background treats to dish out before we're done, hope you'll like them as well. Thanks for the feedback and for letting me know you're enjoying the story. :>)
Chapter 10: Teen Years part 3
Another chapter and it was out quicker than the last one. Can I ask are we nearing the end of this fic yet? Because seriously be cool if there was like another ten chapters to go:) Anyway, another great chapter, loved the banter at the end, really cool. I also liked how the woman(sorry can't remember her name)Stood up the mayor, hmm...does she possibly hold some more power than him? Are we gonna see her again? What about the kids that got sold as slaves? Do we met them again? Okay I promise I will shut up asking questions now, honestly;) Great chapter and i look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Well, I'll be honest, there is only five more chapters left, including the one I just posted. My beta is an angel and has been working hard to help me get those chapters churned out to you as the story is finished being written, or at least this part segment of the series. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the journey and as for your question about Margetta...sadly no. The boys have changed and so they must move on, but I hope you'll enjoy what comes next. Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback and encouragement, it makes me smile. :>)
Chapter 11: Teen Years part 4