I really liked this story. I have favourite moments that I've reread :) John realising that Carson cannot turn off the screen. The interface adapting to give Carson what he needs. John's exhibitionist streak ;) thankyou.
You wrote this very well. I liked the quiet sadness in both Daniel and Simon. I liked how Dr Beckett would let Simon run the infirmary and I loved the simple joy in Simon watching his sister before it all began.
This is a good fun story. I like the laid back killer sharks and how you kept everything balanced so it could go either way until the end. Hey I would be freaked out if sharks were whispering the equivalent of 'Come on in the waters nice'.
Summary: They called them the Wraith, ghosts that walked and brought death on their hands, and no country objected when their brightest and best children were demanded in order to prepare to fight the alien menace.
I adored this story. I love the way Jeanie is just as smart as her brother and the way David is trying. The world building is truly amazing.
Chapter 14: Epilogue
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