I really liked this story. I have favourite moments that I've reread :) John realising that Carson cannot turn off the screen. The interface adapting to give Carson what he needs. John's exhibitionist streak ;) thankyou.
You wrote this very well. I liked the quiet sadness in both Daniel and Simon. I liked how Dr Beckett would let Simon run the infirmary and I loved the simple joy in Simon watching his sister before it all began.
This is a good fun story. I like the laid back killer sharks and how you kept everything balanced so it could go either way until the end. Hey I would be freaked out if sharks were whispering the equivalent of 'Come on in the waters nice'.
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