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Penname: Alynna [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 16 Apr 2006
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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 31 Dec 1969; Published: 31 Dec 1969
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Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
09 Oct 2006
I love a good amnesia story, especially when it's during an unusual situation. Glad I stumbled on this. Great job, and I can't wait for more!
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Summary: Rodney, like the city, has held together.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Angst, Challenge, Drama, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2504; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Oct 2006; Published: 11 Oct 2006
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
12 Oct 2006
Yeah, Wow is right. I love the way John and Rodney teeter on the edge of an end to their relationship, and then find their way back to solid ground. Very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm maybe a romantic at heart, but I believe in my boys being together. Of course, I will give them hell in exchange for the right to be happy, but they *will* be together :)
Chapter 1: 1.1

Summary: The first time Major John Sheppard meets him, Doctor Rodney McKay says, "I'm worth more than you and this entire heap of metal put together and quadrupled. Possibly more. Do not crash."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1166; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Jun 2007; Published: 17 Jun 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
17 Jun 2007
You MUST continue this!

I like your version of John's father - not a mean SOB who didn't care about John, but somebody who was scared for his only son. Very well fleshed out in just a few sentences. I'd really like to read more.
Chapter 1: how we learn to fly

Summary: Crack!fic. Teyla and Cadman try some reverse pyschology on a tribe of women that want to 'keep' Rodney and John.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Friendship, Humour, Team, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2291; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Jun 2007; Published: 17 Jun 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
17 Jun 2007
ROTFL! That was funny. High time the boys got put in their place. :)

Author's Response: I was out exercising my overgrown, high energy puppy one day and the thought just came to me...the rest is just wicked history...:-)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "It is all right," says Teyla. She stands still and calm, her gaze following Elizabeth as she paces around the room. "We will do this, Elizabeth, and when we go home, nothing will have changed."

Categories: Slash Pairings > Teyla Emmagan/Weir
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2906; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Jun 2007; Published: 26 Jun 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
26 Jun 2007
Nice! It's rare I find an Elizabeth story that I like, but this was very neatly done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I\'m glad to be able to write something outside your normal reading patterns that you found enjoyable.
Chapter 1: All the Pleasures Prove
Returning Hero by rasah [NC-17]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: WWII Pilot John Sheppard returns home from war, and tries to rekindle his relationship with injured lover Rodney.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Established Relationship, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6683; Completed: Yes
Updated: 09 Jul 2007; Published: 09 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
10 Jul 2007
That was sweet. I have one suggestion: the Air Force didn't become such until 1947. In WWII it was still the Army Air Forces, abbreviated AAF. In the interest of accuracy you may want John to refer to the AAF instead of the Air Force. Here's a brief history: http://www.aafha.org/aaf_or_aircorps.html

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! A couple of people have pointed out the Air Force thing so I\'ll go back and edit it ;)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: The thing is, Rodney never thought he'd be that guy. He's smart; hell, he's a fucking genius. People with half his IQ know better than to get involved with straight guys.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 571; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Jul 2007; Published: 14 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
14 Jul 2007
Ouch. Poor Rodney. And John is officially an ass.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "This makes it, what, the third time this month?"

Categories: Ship Pairings > McKay/Teyla Emmagan
Characters: Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1091; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Jul 2007; Published: 18 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
18 Jul 2007
Oh, that was good! Very sweet. I think you just made Teyla and Rodney my het OTP.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this feedback -- always happy to spread the Rodney/Teyla love (I\'ve written another short story about them that you can find here on Wraithbait under the same author name).
Chapter 1: Made Aliens Do It

Summary: Gilded cages are still cages. Sheppard and McKay turn to each other to survive a life in slavery and afterward.

Updated: 20 Jul 2007; Published: 20 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
21 Jul 2007
I always wondered how this was going to end...

It's perfect.
Chapter 16: Flight

Summary: In which aliens are sent to the zoo, there is shopping, daring rescues, blackouts, crossdressing, jealousy, nervous breakdowns, jailtime, broken engagements, and funding allocation.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, Daniel Jackson, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teal'c, Vala Mal Doran
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6890; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Aug 2007; Published: 28 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
30 Aug 2007
ROTFLMAO!!!! Best crackfic ever! Rodney conspiring with Mitchell and Vala was awesome, and hapless!John was just perfect. Nice job!
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: A story in which nothing is solved, people are still broken at the end, but there is maybe some hope.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: Angst, Humour, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2783; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Sep 2007; Published: 26 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
27 Sep 2007
*This* is the way it would really happen. Very nice. :)

Author's Response: Ohh, thank you! :)
Chapter 1: you're the place i wanted to go
Babel by Freyja [G]
[Reviews - 11]

Summary: After a meeting with an alien shaman, Rodney starts thinking and talking uncontrollably in various languages.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Pre-slash, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 466; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Oct 2007; Published: 04 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
06 Oct 2007
ROTFL! I only got the French, Spanish and a bit of the German & Italian, but it' still funny as hell. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Chapter 1: Babel

Summary: Rodney's going to destroy a world today.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Friendship
Warnings: Adult themes, May squick, Non-consensual
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 523; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Oct 2007; Published: 12 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
12 Oct 2007
Booyah! Go Rodney.

I like this Rodney who's been pushed over the edge, and I love that Sheppard's exactly the same cold, protective, vengeful bastard we occasionaly get a glimpse of on tv. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Yes! I love homicidal maniac!Sheppard. He seriously scares the crap out of me.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: There was just no way that he was a Guide. Really.

Updated: 21 Nov 2007; Published: 21 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
21 Nov 2007
I love a good Sentinel crossover, and this one looks promising. Hope you don't keep us waiting too long. :)
Chapter 1: The Unlikely Guide

Summary: John wasn't willing to give up the sky. Not even for the one thing that might make him whole. At least, not at first.

Updated: 29 Nov 2007; Published: 29 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
29 Nov 2007
Hey, another promising Sentinel crossover. Coolness! Looking forward to more.
Chapter 1: The Unwilling Sentinel

Summary: A story about family and memories.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Established Relationship, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1957; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Dec 2007; Published: 15 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
16 Dec 2007
That was lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Chapter 1: --

Summary: O'Neill and Woolsey arrive in Atlantis along with SG-1. Shortly thereafter, Sheppard and McKay find themselves in a race to catch a murderer.

Updated: 20 Dec 2007; Published: 20 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
20 Dec 2007
Ouch. That last scene - just ouch. Poor Rodney knows what he's getting isn't real, but he's taking it anyway. And no wonder John's suicidal. One day they're going to demand he betray Atlantis, and wouldn't it be better to die for her than to have to reveal himself to his friends? 'cause I kinda think he might betray them in the end if he doesn't get the chance to go down fighting. Keeping his cover is too ingrained. I love the way you wrote John - no telling which direction he'll go in the future.

Very cool story all around. I love the detail, the different points of view and the emotion. Nice to see Vala in action, too, and I thought you did Woolsey very well. And, of course, anytime Rodney's in charge just rocks! Very nice job!
Chapter 1: Judas Doesn't Answer
It's so easy by Ciar [NC-17]

Summary: FBI Agent John Sheppard accepts a bet that leads to a big change in his life.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Steven Caldwell, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 21 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 59262; Completed: No
Updated: 22 Feb 2010; Published: 29 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
31 Dec 2007
ROTFL! Just please don't hurt Rodney! Let him in on the bet so he can shove it in Bates' face too!

Author's Response: Rodney is safe in my hands, and John\'s ;)
Chapter 2: Getting To Know Meredith
Sacrifice by Diamondblade [PG-13]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: Episode Tag to 'This Mortal Coil' - Only one Rodney McKay returns from the planet that they'd agreed to meet on, but which Rodney?

Categories: General
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 547; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Jan 2008; Published: 31 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
02 Jan 2008
Yeah, I can see our Rodney doing that. Nice. :)
Chapter 1: Sacrifice

Summary: Written for leyenn in response to her request as part of the SGA Secret Santa fic exchange. She asked for "McKay/Sheppard as an established relationship prior to going to Atlantis. Bonus points for fitting it into canon as much as possible, cherry on top for someone/everyone/Atlantis finding out about their relationship. I love angst and an eventual happy ending." Well, I tried my best to fulfill all of these criteria!

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: Character Study, Established Relationship, First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 14326; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jan 2008; Published: 01 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
02 Jan 2008
Don't remember if I reviewed this when it was posted to the sga_santa comm... I really liked John and Rodney's first meeting, and Rodney's rambling letters and emails. Going back and forth between the past and present made it all the more interesting. Nice work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting! I\'m really glad you enjoyed it and it\'s especially nice to hear that the time shifting worked. :) cep xxx
Chapter 1: Chapter 1